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for All Desire in a Day

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule December 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #5..

Maaaan, I take it this is about to get more complicated for Draco?
Also, I hope he learns a lesson from this when it's all over & learn to
leave things alone!
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very different? I am curious to say the least. Honestly I couldn't help but simply sigh throughout this whole chapter, Malfoy is a git but at least Draco is regretting this foolish journey. One can only hope that he will learn to appreciate his Harry more after this. I also had to laugh at Harry speaking with Blaise I am so prepared for something to happen in that situation that it is hardly funny. Good chapter as usual, you did a good job of portraying Draco's frustration in this one more than the others I would say. I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work.

~Fullmoon
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think this is wonderful. I hate stories where Harry ends up in Slytherin, and he's suddenly all "wave your green and silver banners" This is the most realistic portrayal of Harry in Slytherin I have ever read! Can't wait for more :)
person AlterEquis
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying this story big time!

It's really fun to see a mature Draco react to the very petty and snotty Malfoy.

Cheers
person Talltree-san
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I almost feel sorry for young Malfoy. It seems like every which way he turns and says makes the situation between him and Y. Harry all the more worse. And it seems like it may just get alot worse for Malfoy, and especially Y. Harry. And Y. Harry having to use ward spells around his bed that was really sad I never really thought about it that way for Y. Harry when he was in Gryfindor.
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
to date all I can say is, so much for the hats 'you'd do well in Slyth' because doing well he is certainly not! I'm not looking forward to the tri wiz or umbitch's inquisition. It'll be so much harder for har in slyth, so much more pressure.
person CJB
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story I can't wait for more!
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting take. I've seen lots were a Har Slyth = dark or at least extremely manipulative Har. It's the first time I've seen him as a Lion in the Snake pit. I'm glad Har was in Gryff, at least he had quiddiach as an escape. If Malfoy the boy had been more mature they might have been friends, alas... *shrugs.
person SParker
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Sooo...what it all boils down to is this, no matter
what time period, alt. universe or what-not, Draco will
always be drawn to Harry & strive to get his attention.
It's like they are yin and yang, don't you think?

But, help me with something...is this like a 'what-if' for
Draco or did he change things when he did that spell?
person AlterEquis
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

This fic keeps getting better, I really start to like the way this fic enables you to write trough the years without having to explain all the details.

And so nice that he still got the sword of griffindor from the had instead of some slytherin artifact.

Next to that I really like the combination of mature-Draco and not-likable-snotty-git-Malfoy