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I would definitely say I have to agree with you after reading this chapter. Things certainly are taking some interesting turns, I always find it unfortunate when Draco acts pathetic such as his performance in the duel but considering he is still a young prat at this point I don't expect more. It's intriguing how both Draco and Malfoy seem to think Harry killed Lucius even though Harry says otherwise constantly. This Harry definitely frightens me not because of what he does but how he deals with his emotions, normal Harry is extremely emotional, all of that being bottled up is making this Harry a ticking time bomb. The toll is even showing on his face at this point. However, although Draco said he would never look at his Harry the same, I still see ways in which this trip could benefit their relationship. If nothing else Draco can sit Harry down when he returns and find out all the things he wasn't told such as the blood quill, it may be old news but saying these things could maybe help his Harry get over them even if it's just subconsciously. Plus that can add some trust which hopefully will counteract Draco losing that by taking this trip in the first place. Lovely chapter, still exited for how you will portray sixth year, so definitely lookin forward to the next chapter. Great writing!

~Fullmoon

oh my gosh... this story is unbelievable... I just read it from the beginning and couldn't stop. Actually I wish I hadn't found it yet and started it after it was already done... because waiting is going to be so stinking hard!!! This story has totally sucked me in .... really really awesome.

This is a serious on-the-edge-of-my-seat WHAT-WILL-HAPPEN-NEXT story. I don't review as often as I'd like (ie, every chapter) because I usually open them at the library and take my computer home and read them later, where I have no internet access to be making reviews. But I can't believe how dark this suddenly got, I'm seriously loving how it's turning out, and I can't wait to see where it goes. 8D

about #6...

Harry hissed something in Parseltongue. A sentence. No, a spell. Snakes formed from the air, dropping on Malfoy's head,
draping themselves around his neck and his arms, pulling tight..

*hops up & down in front of the authoress shouting* How come you don't put stuff like that in your OTHER stories
especially when Harry is an Auror??!!!?? S*** like this is perfect in a story for aurors!

*calms down* I refuse to tell you if this chapter was good or not....hmph. :-p

OMG, finally made it to a computer! Sorry for my absense, my job can be a real bitch sometime *coughs allthetime*. They made me work on CHRISTMAS, but fortunately I managed to go visit my dad afterwards so at least there's that. But anyway is it just me or is young Malfoy becoming more and more unhinged, I can say the same thing about young Potter as well. I mean venom...in the EYES, even though Y.M. was about to curse Y.P. but VENOM IN THE EYES good GodAllmighty. But I guess I have to remind myself that were not dealing with the same Y.P. here, Harry would be appalled at his younger self. The visions are getting more crazy more scary it's like as time goes by Y.P. is becoming more a Dark Lord than a Goldan Boy Savior, but of a different nature than Voldemort who is just flat out crazy!

another great chapter, but i really am worried about draco's reactions when he gets back to the real world. this dream version of harry was definitely kind of frightening, so calm and cold about his attack on draco, the one in the bed was different, i liked that he had them set so if draco changed his mind they wouldnt' react. keep up the good work

My reactions during this chapter:

Oh god the BlaisexHarry, I just had to be right *dies*

Wait...Lucius?....oh poor Draco *dies again*

And now I am on the brink of a third death at all the possibilities this story could take right now. You saying that real Draco is rethinking his relationship with real Harry worries me the most. I just hope he is able to differentiate between what could have been and what was by the time the visions end. I am extremely anxious for the sixth year now, I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the good yet agonizing (in a pleasant way) work.

~Fullmoon

Wow things are really starting to deviate now, Lucius dead. . . that will influence a lot of the story to come.

I wonder what moody did in this version, probably about the same since you didn't describe it.

Wel I stay tuned for the next chapter :)

It's a shame he's re thinking his relationship over a what might have been. He said it himself... well thought it anyway. This one is different from his har. I wonder who took out Malfoy sr. After all, even changed as he is, i don't think Har would deliberately kill. I do agree with draco though. This just keeps getting worse.

wow, this is really an awesome concept and very well executed. it's neat to see harry still doing everyhting he did but as an unwanted part of slytherin. very cool story so far, can't wait to see what happens next though draco does sound like he's getting a little paranoid about his actual relationship