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for All Desire in a Day

by Lomonaaeren

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! I absolutelly loved this fic! Loved it! So dark and anxious, a real slap in the face with reality. I think this story is very applicable to real life and its lessons. Well done!
person Jien
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. would be nice if it had a sequel :>
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Draco is an idiot, but at least I think he's learned his lesson. He's lucky that Harry wasn't angrier than he was, and he deserved a lot more. I think he knows it too. It was kinda sad to see the way that Harry sort of turned in on himself as he became older in the house of the snake. Snape was just as much of an idiot as Draco, and that dumb blond should have known that what he had was a great gift and to not question it. Oh well. At least he's wiser now, yes? Wonderful as always, and I look forward to your next fic that you finish. *whisper Parsimony, yes*
person SParker
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I meant cliffhanger, not end...
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about the end...

Well, I'm glad Draco is back, didn't die AND Harry took
him to task for his stupidity in an offhanded way...and
yes a strong & stubborn Harry is good for beating rituals
back...keep that in mind.

All in all, this was all good & I hope Draco truly learned
something, no matter what he says.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
no, sexuality is irelevant when you truly despise someone.
I've had man, drop dead gorgeous acording to all, but in my eyes they were piles of shit.
It is like you've put it in your end, cemented feelings are cemented they can't be shaken with 'hey we're both gay/straight'.
It's a very unusual, but very well thought, written fic.
I enjoyed reading it.
person Leania07
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story and perhaps it was a good thing Draco did this ritual; I'm sure he's more apt to think before he speaks now. As many have said (different stories and such) knowledge is power. Thank you for the thought you put into this, it was quite enjoyable.

Leania
schedule January 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Har made me lol. Next time you want to know something... ASK ME. The sitch kind of reminded me of that evil clown from the simpsons writing hate letters to bart with his own blood because it's more dramatic... it was just that sort of sillyness level.
The difference being, this one nearly got draco dead for answers har could have easily given him. at least he'll treasure har now. They're so much better together than a part... what other partner could kick a dark rituals arse. ^^
person O-chan
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah geeze, this story is so engrossing! At the end of chapter 8 I was feeling so numb and anxious, just waiting for Draco
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story.It's real. Emotions don't shift. Ppl often think they can disregared their family, the way they were brought up and country they live in but they can't. What shapes you up&surounds you turns you into the person you are.
So of course Harry would coldly despise Draco if not ignoring him, and this is something Draco needs to be aware of.
Your bad and tragic life leaves nightmares, fears and bitterly learned lessons that don't go away with love&whatnots.
They tend to stick to you because in realitiy it is dirt from other ppl whose dishonorable actions have markes your life.

So , I like this story very much.
I just don't know how will you 'write' feelings into Harry( when I despise someone there is no aspect of his sexuality that I'm not blind to, and mine cease to exist when around him) because I am more interested in that 'scenario' then in the one where he returns to the 'original universe' where Harry and Blaise aren't hooked up.
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco!!! That has to be so hard watching Harry with someone else. And all those stupid decisions. I wonder if when this is over whether Draco will be able to get past all these added memories. If I was him I would pull all those memories out!