rate_review Reviews

Please keep going! :)

PLease update soon, i love any pairing with Remus in it...except Remus/Tonks...just did not like her...know what i mean? PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!!!!

I love this!

And I apologize for this mini-rant which is not directly related to the reviewing of your story, but what's up with the bad ratings around here??? I slog through a bunch of barely readable stuff, and finally stumble across your great story, to find that it only has three stars?!

Anyway, don't let it discourage you! I really enjoyed this, and would love to read more. I like the balance of the seriousness of the first chapter, which was beautifully written, and the funny, lighter style of the other chapters. "The bathroom must be one hell of a shag..." ?? Yeah, funniest line I've read in a long time. :) My only critique is that a few times the abrupt shift in POV was a little confusing. I also kept wishing the scenes were longer! Sometimes it felt a little rushed...

But in general I like it a lot; I'm a huge Marauders fan, and I'm looking forward to the smutty bits. ;)

Interesting.