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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't have a lot of time, but I had to at least leave a review to say how much I am enjoying the unfolding of this story. Thank you!! HG4eva
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December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if you noticed this, but chapter 2 and 3 are the same.
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December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is great. I am a long time lover of Robin Hood stories. But I have to say that Draco's sexually molesting Hermione when he first captures her ruined him for me. Then it seems to be ignored like it never happened. For instance, when Hermione is thinking the men wouldn't touch her innapropiately when Draco already has. Then Draco talking about how Ron doesn't know how to touch her gently, all I could think about was how he was even worse! Draco is a man willing to cross a certain line with women and that doesn't disappear for me. He's no Errol Flynn.
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am curious as to why they are outlaws. Because of their part in the war? I wouldn't call Draco molesting Hermione "no harm." It seemed like the aurors were in the encampment? I'm confused about that part.
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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how this pans out. I love the premise
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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....I think I'm going to really like this. You have a very interesting plot and I can't wait to read more about Draco and his merry men.
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please! Nxt chaper! I have been checking this every day. I want to know more about the agenda of those "merry men." What happen to the wizerding world? Is harry suppose to be in the wrong?why is he the sheriff equavelent?draco is quite distant-and not very likeable-how will the relationship develope?Plz more...
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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!! more please!!