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July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would like to receive updates!!
Wildrose5494@gmail.com
Wildrose5494@gmail.com
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July 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey
I like the story so far please keep updating
I did get a bit confused on the paragraph about the woman who was casting a protective spell around her stomach until she is sixth months pregnant I was trying to think of who she is so here's hoping you will put a name to her next chapter
cullengal101
I like the story so far please keep updating
I did get a bit confused on the paragraph about the woman who was casting a protective spell around her stomach until she is sixth months pregnant I was trying to think of who she is so here's hoping you will put a name to her next chapter
cullengal101
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March 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOVED it :D
update soon :D
update soon :D
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
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January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok love the plot of your story but your rushing it. You could easily add a couple more chapter by dragging out Snape telling Harry the truth. Also by having Harry being confused and denying it. Then have him start searching for answers. Slowly have him see Dumbledore is lying and hiding things from him. Just an example of things you could do to make the story flow easier. You clearly have the talent and the imagination for it just take your time.
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December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'm so confused now. What happened to chapters 2 & 3?
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December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Where are chapters 2 and 3?
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December 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lmao poor harry. loved the idea of all the secret keepers having to just pop up, can just imagine how chaotic that could be. of course, not sure why harry was getting confused on sirius being a "mom" when he had just been told that james was his "mom", but guess can chalk it up to him being in shock through that part. nice start to things, look forward to seeing where you go with it
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Hope you continue.
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!