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Finally finished the story and it was WONDERFUL. As I have found all of your other stories to be gems too, I figured I would come back and read the one that started it all. I am glad that I did, I am duly impressed as always...THANK YOU for such an enjoyable read!!!!

BEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ!!!! From beginning to end, I loved every part of it! Your are a FANTASTIC WRITER! It took me a couple of days but I read the whole thing straight through. I'm looking forward to read the other side stories. I know they are going to be just as good! :) 1000000000/10

i just loved this story! absolutuly amazing! i just cant believe that this is just a fan fic. the details and the planning you must have done was amazing! just 20 out of 10 in my books! just wow. i cudnt stop reading it, and was soo sad when it was over. kinda wish there was a bit of hermione and draco dating chapters after. u dont really get to see ur heros enjoy life after the climax. but just wow. loved it all! deff a fan of ur work!

just a little confussed as to whoes kids are whoes.... cud u do a mini family tree thing to sort it out. kinda got confussing in the end.


loove ur story!!! hope the sequel is still a Hermione and Draco. i wud love to see them being parents!

Take care!!

hi, hello haha...sorry just being weird lol....i just wanted to say that this story is amazing and i havnt even finished it. youre a really talented author and think of all the angles and beyond. not many can do that with such a complicated plot. i really hate to do this but i love mythology and am taking a class based of books written in greek mythology and well....this is the only mistake i have found in the millions of words you have written...."Orpheus. Circe herself told the crew of a ship to plug their ears with beeswax to drown out the call." ..... you are right about Circe, the wax, and the sirens...but it was Odysseus and his crew that left Circe's island and passed through the sirens... he had his crew tie him to the mass while the crew had the ear wax in. their song was all about complimenting him (or whoever was listening)..luring them to their deaths. i dont know about beauty but they were half bird half women... cud be good looking who knows. If you want to double check my facts its from the book "The Odessy of Homer"... its all about Odysseus going to the trojan war for 10 years, and then taking another 10yrs to come home.
haha sorry im rambling but its because i really love this subject and the book is great...studied it for at least a month in my university class. But please believe me it was Odysseus.

again this is an amaizing story! i just cant go to sleep without reading a chapter or two. its just brilliant how everything is thought out and there are no flaws in the plot! how u managed this is unreal! so Bravo! hats off to you ^_^

take care!

GreenEyedMist@outlook.com

Hello! I'm certainly enjoying your story, I'm only on chapter 37 and really glad that I have so many chapters left to go, as I don't want it to end! I've noticed a few little errors in grammar(proofreading is a large part of how I make a living) and I'd love to help you out, is there any way to message you on here? I'm fairly new to this site. Are you on ff.net? I'm there under the same pen name, so you can message me if you're over there as well and we can figure this out. :)

This story was sooooooooo good I just want to start it all over again because I don't want it to end!!! Definitely prefered this ending to JK's ending but that's mainly because I don't like Ron with Hermione. I also love what you did with Snape's character. I can't wait to read more of your stuff, especially since this is my first of yours

Wonderful story! Full of twist and turns and wonderfully long! I absolutely loved it! Please write more soon!

Finished ch. 21. I love that Bible excerpt. <3 Love is what ties Hermione and Draco together, not their bond. One day, I want the world to see that.
Poor Harry. I feel so much for him. Snape needs to get over casting his hatred of James onto Harry. He does Lily so great a dis-serve to be so mean to her son. He is as much of HER as he is JAMES. And, to hear some tell it, he's more like her than James (compassionate, clever, strong). Sigh.
Anyway, I know you've finished this story already, but I wanted you to know that I'm enjoying it.
Take care,
SW

Just finished my re-read. It gets better every time I read it. I've also found that I can't help but inject my OC's into it too... You're so bad for my health, but I love it. :)