rate_review Reviews

You know, I saw this story in the updates for a while and kept skipping over it because I was thinking it was going to be one of those hardcore bondage type things. I'm so glad it wasn't. But I'm also a little glad that I didn't start your story sooner. I checked twice today to see if there was an update. I fear that if I'd started this story at the beginning, checking for updates would have become something of a compulsion by now...

Anyway! Wonderful chapter! I understand where Hermione's coming from worrying about Draco's affections, but that doesn't mean I didn't want to hit her for being so stupid. I had the strange desire to smoosh her and Draco together like a five year old with dolls and tell them to stop whining and get along already. *grins* I love how realistic your characters are.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

~Frosty

*SIGH* Draco & Hermione have hopefully gotten that bit of stupidity out of their system & will now go about getting themselves fully bound. Both of them developing some day walker abilities should be interesting. If Draco has gotten some of Snape's magnetism, will Hermione also get it & then more boys start paying attention to her? As far as Snape is concerned, I've never really liked him as a character in general but I've come to really like your version. While he appears to be OOC, I could see this being what he was really like under his master spy/Death Eater exterior that was portrayed in the books. On another note, I love your version of Ginny! She's becoming such a strong & vibrant character & will be an equal match for Harry. Looking forward to the next update!

I love your explanation of the magic and its balances. When Snape's history was revealed I had a moment of "Ooooh! That explains everything!" before I remembered that this was a fanfiction and not part of the original story. Still, I'm not sure if I'll be able to read the books again without wondering about Snape... I also love the idea of Hermione and Draco's magic balancing out when they're together. It seems somehow fitting.

This chapter was great! Though I can't help feeling that Harry might be pretty upset with Hermione when the real truth comes out... He freaked out because he thought she fancied Draco, I can only imagine the explosion when he finds out it was so much more. Brains everywhere. I'm sure some of them will be Ron's.

Anyway, even though your chapters are wonderfully long, I always feel like they're too short. I'm just a greedy reader, always wanting to know what happens NOW instead of having to wait. Update soon?

~Frosty

LMAO@ Snape's, and Draco and Hermione's theme songs.


Hermione has got to stop with the waterworks. Sheesh, she cries at the drop of a hat. I didn't mind the tears earlier; nevertheless it's getting a tad...annoying. Sorry, but she's crying like a woman with a hormonal imbalance. It would be different if as a reader, I could sympathize with her tears, but unfortunately most times the writing is more show than tell.

Still love this story.

Hermione and Draco better work out all of their differences since they'll be together forever. I wonder if they will get a 'happily every after'. I can't wait for the romance to bloom, the kiss was a nice prelude to that.

Mione is having a hell of time. She's had a lot to deal with in such a short amount of time. I like that her feelings are genuine. She's a hormonal teenage girl, and you're doing a great job of portraying her that way. I like how their feeling for each other get stronger each chapter. This story is very well paced.

Chapter seven was FANTASTIC! it was beautifully written. I loved the scene of them touching each others and how Draco couldn't wait to touch her. Des'ree's 'Kissing You' from Romeo and Juliet popped into my head during that scene.

This is a really good story. I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews as it is one of the best Dramione stories I've read. It's romantic, without being cheesy, and I love that it isn't just about sex. Draco and Hermione are very much in character.

I'm not sure if this is on ff.net but I think it would go over well over there. I rarely read stories on that sight; however, I've noticed that some non-smut related stories do better over there than here.

Keep up the good work!

I'm happy that the kids no longer have to call Severus father. Having Narcissa and the Grangers come for a little celebration was a nice touch. Thank goodness Lucius wont be able to track Draco through their blood. I like that Draco now wants to marry Hermione because he's grown to care for her. I look forward to the day when Hermione realizes she feels the same.

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This is a wonderful story! I so love finding the near-daily updates! Can't wait to see what happens next
Good luck with your thesis :)