rate_review Reviews

Nooooooooooooooooo! Why? I am truly going to your update they always make my day. So far so awesome. So many twist I think I am in LOVE!!

Your writing is magnificent! Like on the same level as J. K. herself! I love your story so far btw, I cafnt wait for chapter 18 :D

I'm happy that they waited until marriage to complete the bond. It was old fashion but very sweet. I didn't really read the sex scene; however, what I did read was fine. (sorry, I'm sooo over sex scenes, lol)

The bond didn't make the fall head over heels in a matter of seconds, which is a plus in my book. I like that Hermione is still freaked out about being married, and Draco is realizing that his decisions are no longer just his own. Their reactions are natural, and I appreciate that you aren't forcing the emotions on them but letting the characters evolve with the relationship.

I'm new to your story and so glad that I found it! Amazingly fun adventure I cant wait to read more, you've really engrossed me in the plot and the relationships in the story. Thank you for sharing with us.

Another chapter! I was so excited when I saw it. The story's taken an interesting twist, and I'm dying to know where it goes from here. It looks like we're going to get a look into Snape's past. I can't wait! Update soon?

~Frosty

I absoloutly love this story. Your work is amazing, and the story line is captivating!
Keep up the good work.
Happy writing.
Megan <3

:D i love this story
i dont know if you realise that yet :P

OMFG! *Fans Self* That was hot!!! Outstanding job for your first written sex scene. The quicky in the shower was great, too.

So far you seem to be following along pretty closely to the major happenings in Half-Blood Prince. In fact, these could almost be hidden moments from the book. I'm interested to see how you handle things, if you do have Severus & Draco on the run after "killing" Albus. Will you have the trio dealing with the horcruxes ala Deathly Hallows? If so, it will be interesting to see how you will sort out the Hermione/Draco relationship & Harry, Ron, & Ginny. KUTGW!

I'm enjoying the story very much and can't wait to see where it goes. I only have one criticism if you can call it that. I have to play devil's advocate. Or, in this case Harry's advocate. Hermione is very angry because he doesn't seem to trust her. But, in all fairness, she HAS been lying to him for months. And, she didn't trust him, either. If she had, she would have told him the truth and trusted that he would come to accept her bond with Draco.

You are your own worst critic: I thought that your love scene was sweet and touching. I think that you made Draco just sweet enough to deal with Hermione's issue, while not detracting from his own experience.

I click on your story just as soon as you update, so keep it up. I am loving it!