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*shoots hand up in the air Hermione style* I am very glad that Harry is not completely in the dark anymore. I Wish he could know more about Hermione and Draco's relationship but I get the idea that Old Moldy Shorts could find out. I do love the humor that you put into this story :)

It's Monday morning after winter break and I saw this was updated at 6:45. It shows how much I love your story that I still managed to muster up a whole lot of excitement, particularly once I saw the title of this chapter and realized what was going to happen. It was great! I'm glad Harry knows. I was waiting for him to make the connection between Hermione's pet hummingbird and her animagus form. I mean, how many oddly coloured hummingbirds with strangely human eyes can there be? He was being a little dense not to make at least a small connection. Though I suppose it's possible he did make the connection and just didn't ask because he knew it was something they couldn't tell him. Either way, wonderful chapter and I'm dying to read the next. Update soon?

~Frosty

Eep I kept semi shaking while reading that! I'm glad harry isn't Completely Clueless now XD The end bit was amazing! Ginny FTW! It amazing checking back on here everyday before I go to sleep and in the morning when I wake up and seeing that a new chapter had been added, like a little adrenaline rush :D

Melody is so much fun!!! I especially liked the way she messed with the Slytherins. Her meeting with Moldy Shorts should be extremely interesting. Yay for animagus Harry (& Ginny)!

I loved the little song at the end. The poor Slytherins were probably so confused, and they only had detentions to show for all their snooping. I also loved that Harry and Ginny were kind of bewildered and overwhelmed once they were let in the room, while Hermione and Draco were just calmly making lists. It was great. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

~Frosty

Hello my dear! Well, you certainly ran the gamut of emotions in that one, didn't you? lol "Vacation" was hysterical and Harry and Ginny's reactions perfect. I really like Celeste and Harmony, but I love love love Melody! Not many people can introduce new characters so effortlessly and make me love them so much, but you have done it. Brava! I hate that she will have to join Moldy's army, but I understand. Sigh. And, thank you for creating someone who so easily puts Harry in his place. I love the guy, but he needs to understand that this is bigger than him and not all is at he thinks it is. I keep hearing the song "Free Your Mind" by En Vogue whenever he enters a room. lol Oh! There was one mistake you might want to fix. It wasn't horrible and I think everyone can figure it out, but if you're going back... Right before she reads the letter it says, "Hermione

I love a bad ass Hermione. She may be a bookworm but she has a feisty side! Great job as always dear!

Harry being stubborn?! Never! lol This chapter was so much fun!!! The dolls were brilliant and the scene with Ron was FABULOUS!! And, I'd forgotten about the thrall from Draco and Hermione. Thank you for making her desired by others for a change. Too many people write stories where no one but Draco/Lucius/Severus can see her beauty, while everyone can see theirs. I know it's the thrall, but it's nice to see her fending them off for a change! Looking forward to more really soon! Thanks, HG4eva

Oh lucky me! I got to read two chapters! I LOVED the little dolls :D very creative. I can't wait to read more and see the development of Harry.

I really want harry to get it together so he can be in on the secrets already!!