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by goldhorse

schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice! DAMN THE CLIFFHANGER! But it's good your got through your thesis. I did like this chapter, and loved the three stooges action. Now Ron is going to flip some shit. :p
person Kimbovet
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed Molly getting knocked down a peg by Melody & Alec messing with Severus. I've actually come to like Alex a lot as a character. He's perfect for Melody. Now it's time for Ron to get some sense knocked into him.
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm still in awe of how well you write and keep finding new twists and turns to add to the mix!
person Frosty
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sad! It was still well written, of course, but so sad! I'm not sure petting a bunny is the best thing to get over it, those fuzzy little guys are evil masterminds - or at least mine was. Maybe a baby bunny would work... Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the aftermath of all the badness... Also, Voldemort needs to die and I feel like basically everyone is going to need some serious therapy after the day they've had.

Good luck on your thesis presentation! Though if your academic work is anything like your fanfiction, you don't need it.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

~Frosty
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i was hoping you'd get a new chapter up soon. That was amazing. No i don't love torture scenes, but you did a fantastic job on a very diffcult scene/situation.

I'm a little bit impatient! lol i'm going to reread from the beginning. Taking my time this time :)
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice. This chapter was a very intense and dark story in a good way. I can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
person Alice
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was gruesome *shudders* I admit, I did tear up a bit there :'l
Btw, this is gonna sound both creepy and weird but...I know how Melody looks - well i can image her in my mind - but I have no idea on her skin. Like is it rinkly, is it smooth? Could yoh post a link or smething answering my query by any chance? I'll be eternally grateful :-) xx
person Josie
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG..that was soo good. Poor Draco, poor Melody. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Good Luck with your Thesis :)
person anya
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing, I read so many fanfics and this is definitely one of my favourites if not the most. Perfect balance of everything, it really feels like the personas aren't out of character at all, like they're those same familiar personas just more developed. I'm a huge fan of JK rowling, but I must say your plot is absolutely genius!! I love how you kept them all in character. Perfect! I hopes there's more coming soon, I literally can't wait; read the whole story from my blackberry in 3 days every moment I got. Masterpiece =)
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. ugh molly just needs to go away, such a nosey bossy woman. and a vote for the foursome secene. and good luck on the paper.