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by goldhorse

person Leania07
schedule February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm not done with the chapters yet, but I really had to write this review. Congratulations, you are the first author to make me laugh so hard I literally rolled off my bed. Don't worry, I wasn't hurt, its just two mattresses on a carpeted floor. Made my husband laugh at me, and brought up the old joke of me sounding like Muttley (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SKm5xQyD2vE is a link to the laugh if you are unfamiliar). After almost 10 minutes of laughing (and still suffering from the *gigglesnorts* after) I was finally able to calm down only to be done in again when I read Sevy's intro music. You're killing me m'dear! Good job, and I have to take a break to give my stomach and sides a rest.

Leania
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good story, still hard on ron, he hurt that his friend did not come vist him at the hostpaital, even if hermoine cant harry and ginny could.

two ron does not know hermoine married so sleeping with draco make her a harlot, not sure where hypcotate came form inless ron sleeping with lavendor.

and ron has no reason to trust these people, he afraid that there going to hurt his friends, in stead of tying show that they are there to help they attack him, ginny a bitch not defending her brother. let me ask a question, you are in a room, with 5 most wanted people, and one dating your best friend, would you not thank they are dagerous, and ron still in love with hermoine,

schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as always goldhorse. I loved reading about celeste in action. I did notice one mistake. After she says that she considers hermione and draco family..

person Kimbovet
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! Ron finally got what was coming to him. Although, I think they went easy on him in the end. Just hope he keeps his mouth shut & his mind locked. Ron is known for his loyalty & I think he will be loyal to Hermione once he calms down some. Still it wouldn't take much for him to get angry again & spout off something in public that could cause them trouble. Looks like the action is about to get started back up, so look forward to the next chapter. Oh BTW, I would love to see a one-shot about Snape & Celeste.
person Alice
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* Ooh I found some mistakes! Yes that does make me feel smart...:L

person elfchick
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! New reader here. I have devoured your fic over the last two days; I can't get enough (feel like Draco and Hermione!). I've read a ton of fanfics and even written one myself, and yours is one of two that are now held in a category of awesomeness all their own. This story is AMAZING. PERIOD. You have such a gift, do you know that? I wish they'd make a damn movie out of this story (with Tom Felton, of course, in every nuclear-hot sex scene and me playing Hermione). Your concepts of magic, vampires, bonding- all the very heady stuff- are brilliant. I adore this story and I'm on pins and needles for the next chapter. One teeny note for you, because you always ask for them- there are two places where you mention Draco and Hermione's magic coming to full maturity- you've written "majority" instead. I'm sorry that I didn't pay attention as to what chapters they were in, but that's your fault for writing such a mesmorizing story! Keep it up, sweetie! :D
person Heytyo
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!!! On the edge of my seat every chapter! I would also love to get a behind-the-scenes look at Severus and Celeste' s relationship...
person Alice
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Call me close minded but I don't even want to go there (SS/HG) *shudders*
I read like half of the one-shot of the four of them...and I can't remember why I didn't finish it :S I guess thats my mission after I submit this review ;D This chapter was as amazing as ever, I absolutely loved it! And I think Frosty has got to me :l I start to feel neglected after a couple of days with no update :L Until next time - which I hope isn't too far from the near future - ttfn :-)
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK< you're evil! how could you leave us like that *pouting*

Another fantastic chapter. I kind of missed the passionate kisses while Draco pounded into her like crazy... even once or twice... lol

I sit here refreshing the Draco/Hermione page daily waiting for updates on this story. I'm going to be so sad when its over!
schedule February 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, but sick of the ron a git, ron lost the women he loves to a guy that tease him and make fun of him, ron still being lied to, so he has reason not to trust draco, i would have took every thing i had not to kill draco, and draco not helping, if he really cared about his wife, he would want her with her best friend, and ginny being a bitch to her brother, how would she feel in harry was with pansy, no body ever told her about it, and when she hurt they go you just a bitch, someone you love in pain, you show them that you love them.