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by goldhorse

schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adore this story! It is def an edge-of-the-seat attention getter. From the first chapter to the newest ones, I
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Loved seeing Hermione and Draco work together! Also, very excited about the Snape/Celeste story!
person Kimbovet
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great job as usual! At least the club thing with the muggle went off without too many problems. Looking forward to the next chapter. Oh since you ask us to tell you of any problems we find - I think you meant "she felt nauseous" instead of "she felt nauseas."
person Nathoca Malfoy
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I've been reading this fic for a long time (sorry I never left a review).
I just wanna say that the fic is perfect! I wouldn't change nothing at it.
I don't like fics that Snape is a Vampire but I felt in love for him at this fic.
And Draco and Hermione are so perfect togheter!
Alex is a character! But Melody and Harmony... they are amazing! I wish that Melody would become a vampire too. It's sad that she will die someday and Alex would kill himself. But it's understandable. Will Draco and Mione live forever as vampires?
Anyway! Can't wait to see what is gonna happen with Sergei and the meeting.
Oh... and Ron is a jerk!!!
I told the plot to my cousin and then she started asking and asking about the fic. Now, she almost call me everyday to ask if you updated it and what happened, as she doesn't speak english. It's really addict!
I know... don't trow up too many rainbows! LOL! But the fic is really good and well writen!
Kisses and thanks for your wonderful story!
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
like the attack on lily and james we know jame was a jerk, as for lily, she did walk away from best friend for him calling her one name, that is low.

like make harry mad to tranfome,

lavendor cheat good get read of her, ron iwth luna that could be good if written well, in cannon i allwasy thought she like ron.

ron a wesly that sucks, hope he would be like a dragon or something cool,

starting to even like snape.
person Alice
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I bet I can guess what you have in mind! :D
One part of this chapter pissed me off cause of personal reasons but the rest was aweshomee, can't I'm so happy you put more Dramione into this chapter! I was actually feeling neglected because of the lack of Dramione :-\
person Kimbovet
schedule February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter with Harry & Ginny getting their animagus forms (despite the horrible way Melody treated Harry to get him started in the transformation), Lavendar getting her comeuppence, & even a little Draco/Hermione action. Now I'm a little worried for what you have in store for Melody after your A/N hint. You've already killed her once, so what's to stop you killing her again. Oh well, we'll see what the future chapters bring. KUTGW
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I tend not to read Draco and Hermione stories, but this one is something really special! I am amazed by all the work you have put into this coming up with all the details about the bond, other characters, etc. I really liked just about everything you have done in this story, but specifics are always best, right? So I will say I really like how everyone (like a family) helps Hermione and Draco work through their jealousy issues and their issues with Ron. Made their relationship more realistic, cause those things happen. Also, I'm glad Harry has gotten on board, but you should have let Celeste kill Ron. Kidding. Sort of :)
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I came in when you were about twenty five chappies in and have been hooked ever since. I get a little rush when I see this story pop up!! It's fantastically written. The OC part if the story is not something I would normally fall in love with but in this it just seems like they are a natural part of the original story! You are very very talented and I look forward to you gaining a little bit confidence in your writing and posting more of your work!! I am also a mother of three in my late..erm... 20's... Lol and reading these is my escape. I love it. I had started posting when I was pregnant with my daughter under irishangel and then life and babies and sickness got in the way. But I always make sure to check in and read. Be proud of your work. You have a gift. The characters may have been born of JKR but alot of them are yours too and the story is entirely yours. Way to go and I can wait for the next instalment. Xxx irishangel2
person Frosty
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As usual, I loved the chapter! But I kind of feel like Melody (while wonderful) takes a lot of the attention away from Hermione and Draco. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

~Frosty