rate_review Reviews

LOVE LOVE LOVE This story, I was in a car accident and this story has pulled me through the depression of not being able to do a whole hell of alot, I sit and read and I always cheer up when I seen "Bound" at the top of the story board. Good luck with your finals! I hope they come and go quickly so you can continue to brighten my days with your great story!!I impatiently await your next update!!
xoxo
Magzie

Beautifully written but I was very close to throttling you if you had killed Melody. I was in tears saying, "Nononononononono! Don't do this no!!" My husband looked at me like I grew a second head XD I am excited for whats next! (By the way good luck on your finals!!)

OMG...I thought this story couldnt get any better (not that it wasnt good before now...it was...really!). You have surpassed yourself...im still tingling from reading it! Good Luck on your exams

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :) xxx

Be encouraged! Your story is still amazing. I take 5-week classes as well, and I know what it's like to have finals every time you turn around! This chapter was chock-full of action. I love that, no matter how many times you write a love scene for Draco and Hermione, it still remains smokin hot! I'm so glad she allowed him his fantasy. ;) It was disturbing to see the alternate fates for them, but I think it was important for them to see. You really write dark subject matter extremely well. Melody is such a well-written character; I can see her and understand her motives as clearly as if I were watching her in a film version of your fic (in which I would kill to play her!). Just feel confident that your plot is exciting, your characters (both HP and your own) are thoroughly engaging, and your readers are still here, enjoying every word. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D

*raises hand*

And

That chapter was so filling! It actuall took me an hour to read case so much was happening - my head shows me things as I read, probably why it took so long *shrugs*. It felt like someone was cutting one of my arteries at the part if the string cutting! It was horrible! So was that alternate universe thing *shudders* I'm so glad they bonded!

Aside from the story, good luck with your finals and don't take more than a week between updates - please?

Now that was an emotional rollercoaster of a chapter! I'm really glad that you didn't kill off Melody though. Loved the shibari bondage scene with Draco/Hermione & especially pissed off Snape bringing Draco the rope & advising him to gag Hermione. LMAO! Oh yeah, I vote for a Harry/Ginny one-shot. Good luck on your finals.

This story has become my number 1 dramione fanfic i started reading about when you were on ch 30 and since then i have pretty much re read the story every time a chapter is posted so that i can get the big picture and then i plan to re read it once the story is finished and most likely again after you make your corrections. I know that you had said like at ch 30 you were thinkin only like 10 or 15 more chapters but i hope you go atleast 5 or 10 past that because i think any less would be rushing the story there is still a lot that needs to be done and the story is already at 42. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I personally wouldnt read the harry/ginny but i think it could make for a good story anyways they have been set perfect for maybe their wedding night one shot or something like that. I did read the two other oneshots you wrote and those were really good. Im not one to normally post reviews but i think ill start trying to say something each time a chapter is posted :D. Oh and i completely did not expect the fates to make an appearance or the bondage part with hermione at the beginning but it just made the story better. As a fellow college student i wish you luck on your finals :).

This is such a deeply,gripping fic! I adore it. I have noticed a few errors but was engrossed in the story that I didn't take note of which chapter they were, but maybe it will help if I tell you. Draco made a joke and you meant to use the word "Posterity" but you instead typed prosperity. Maybe was chapter 6? Unsure...another time you used the word "steak" which is something you eat, instead of stake aka wooden stake used to kill vamps and another time you wrote Purpose instead of Propose as in to ask a person to marry you. I am only telling you because you asked...I am no grammar nazi and LOVE this story and wouldn't ever nitpick silly mistakes like that, but it seems you want to know so that you can fix them so I figured I'd tell you LOl LOVING this fic! You are a great storyteller and I am not even half way!

You know I love this story, but since the wedding it almost seems like I am reading an entirely different story and Dramione has taken a back seat. Your ideas are great, I am just not so sure about Melody,Alex,Celeste characters and I don't really like them, so I find myself skimming to get to some D&H parts and Harry and Ron finding out...even Pansy. It's your story and the first 10 chapters or so were really awesome, but this sudden change and all these new characters is a little jarring to myself as the reader. While I love Snape as well, he's in this too much IMO. I get what you are trying to do, but I miss the tight and clear plotting that you had in chapters 1-10..Starting to feel disjointed and random in places (and confusing) That being said, you are a great storyteller. Your ideas about bound magic, pure,phenom etc...totally AWESOME! That is what is called in the writing High Concept...and it is what sells books. Being able to come up with a high concept idea is NOT easy, so high fives and major kudos to you on that.My only advice would be to stick to the high concept and try not to meander off the beaten path too much in future fics. Introduce new characters not all at once..so the reader can werap their minds around them one at a time. Enjoyable story, good luck and good job :)

I love this story!!! I love how you've written each character! And though
this is a Dramione...I think Snape is my favorite, with all his 'layers' and his
dynamic with Melody. Can't wait for more!! Keep up the excellent work
and thank you for sharing your story with us!!