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great plot and interesting characters!!

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!...I couldn't get enough to find this story!...amazingly written!!

The whole bit about befriending Draco due to Dumbledore and giving him half truths is simply annoying I mean she was in his mind! I have no idea why it couldn't be clear as day that Draco's loyalty is only to himself and his mother!

>Accepting the bound just like that Oh thank God! It's annoying when authors try and write half the bloody story making the couple fall in love. In the grand scheme of relationships, "how couples FALL in love" is a miniscule detail compared to "How a couple LOVES". Granted, I'm reviewing as soon as I saw they were coming to terms with it, and not sure if you're making them fight again later (which is pointless and unoriginal), but I'm glad they're coming to terms with it.

Gah! This story is so damn good I can't stand it! I tried to wait until I finished reading it to review, but I can't help myself lol! I've got 4 chapters to go including the epilogue. I knew from the first few chapters I was going to love this. Hell, I've loved all the other stories of yours I've had the pleasure to read as well. However, this one is exceptional. I can't really find any flaws at all. I majored in English and yeah, I can find an occasional misspelled word, or grammar issue, but even if you have a beta or an editor, it's damn near impossible to catch every single one. And honestly, for the legnth of this story the minor mistakes are very minimal. You'd think being an English major I'd be a grammar nazi, but they really don't bug me at all. Anyway, really just wanted to congratulate you on all your amazing work. As far as fan fiction goes, you managed to sneak up into my top 3 authors, and I don't just read, I devour lol! I can't even read one of your stories if it hasn't been completed yet lol! I can't stand the waiting! So, I am really thrilled I didn't come across this while it was still in the works! Keep writing please, you have a fan for life! Looking forward to anything you may come up with next :)

I absolutely loved this story! It is one of my favorites and I will have it saved under my bookmarks!

First Fanfiction to make my curl up like a baby and sob just as I did reading the Deathly Hallows. Exceptional piece of writing and I'm so glad I got to retreat into this story. A couple lost lives at the end made me a little worse for wear, but it's okay. Can't wait to read the sequel, Melody is the character I never knew I was missing and now going back to read the original will be devoid of something fierce.

I loved this story it was an amazing display of intelligent plot, and compassionate characters. It had steamy scenes and enough fluff to keep a heart flattery. I love your original characters they made the story epic. I love how you managed to build in enough detail to really fill out all the characters. Well done.

This was amazing! You are extremely talented!

I hate ya ya know that, that chapter made me bawal my eyes out all night. It is a great story by the way