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by goldhorse

person Nathoca
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you're original! (LOL)
But I'm enjoying the fic the same way.
It seems it's close to an end! Can't wait!
Kisses.
person Ah...Draco
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I turned my iPad on at work this afternoon and opened my browser where I always have your story open so I can check for updates .....and there it was ....a new chapter! There was no way I could wait until I got home so I put on my headset and pretended to have a conference call so I could read it ...LOL. It was definitely worth it!

I think I was under the impression that Hermoine and Draco were so solid they were untouchable. Now after reading this chapter it makes perfect sense they weren't. They have been apart a lot and that's affected their bond ....good thing I'm not writing this story!

It was so satisfying to see them be themselves in front of other people, to share what they mean to each other. I like how they're back in training again to prepare for the big battle. I didn't like seeing Melody suffer but this is war and it reminds us what the good guys are fighting for.

person Ah...Draco
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I did have a question. When everyone is waiting outside the ROR for Draco to destroy the horcrux, Hermoine turns into her animagus form but earlier it was explained that a persons animagus would set off the wards and the identity of the animagus would be reported to Voldemort. Did i miss something?
Thanks!
person BUMBLEBEE
schedule April 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've read your story thoroughly and very much enjoy it! I've also read your one shots with Sev/Celeste and the Foursome which were absolutely amazing!! It would be so awesome if you could write a one shot scene involving Harry/Ginny! There are so many of Draco/Hermione (duh! this is a D/H story!! :p) I think it would be cool to see a scene between H/G, just to change it up some, you know?

I know you are busy and have a lot going on, but its just a little suggestion thats all!

Keep up the amazing work!! Can't wait to read more!!
person amanda
schedule April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I read your story thru mobile. And let me tell you, I LOVE it! I'm constantly checking for updates and when you got one, I don't put my phone down till the chapter is over. I love stories that have long chapters with many of them and a good plot. Well, you've goot both. What I'm dying to know, is when is hermione going to discover herself pregnant??? I can see you sneaking that in there... Unless if them being the protecters means that they don't get a chance to live happily ever after once the war is done. Now, I don't want to know the answers, I would much rather read about them. So please keep updating. :)
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I had a feeling that today would be the day :D I actual found this chapter pretty awesome, I like how you went into details on the torture...abduction what you did tri Umbridge was pure genius! :D


Ah dam haaha. I remember when I got told in year 3 by my teacher that I needed glasses...I cried so much DX She ended up making me feel better by going into detail about the moving chqir and those glasses that they put different lenses in :3 But bless her haaha, she'll be okaii ;)

June usually isn't my month...probably cause I face my finals then 0_o Anyway, ta ta for now, take care :-)
person Alice
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to sign it again -.-...

I had a feeling that today would be the day :D I actual found this chapter pretty awesome, I like how you went into details on the torture...abduction what you did tri Umbridge was pure genius! :D


Ah dam haaha. I remember when I got told in year 3 by my teacher that I needed glasses...I cried so much DX She ended up making me feel better by going into detail about the moving chqir and those glasses that they put different lenses in :3 But bless her haaha, she'll be okaii ;)

June usually isn't my month...probably cause I face my finals then 0_o Anyway, ta ta for now, take care :-)
person Kimbovet
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yep, RL can suck but concentrate on the good things that happen instead of the bad. Great chapter BTW! I'm happy that Ron & Harry now know the truth & Ron took it so well. Also, Hemione's revenge on Umbitch was excellent. Halloween would be an excellent time to defeat Moldy Pants! Found one error: "their legs feeling like those of a new born dear." Dear should be deer instead. KUTGW
person Frosty
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione and Draco... At least the end of the whole... Voldemort mess is in sight. I have the horrible feeling that the end of this story might not be much beyond that though. I loved the chapter as usual and can't wait for the next! Update soon?

~Frosty
person Ah...Draco
schedule April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been hoping every day for an update and now here it is...another great chapter! I'm so glad to see Harry finding out the truth and Ron's maturity in accepting it. It keeps amazing me how you tell the story we all know but keep it so fresh that I'm always trying to figure out what going to happen next.

Good luck on your exam!!!!!