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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Har will get to know that Mio was hexed in this incarnation. it's the only thing that really irked me about the other one.
At any rate, at least Mio has some hope now. Yay, the Marauders Map. Heh, and that little confession is going to come back to bite snape in the... er, snuggle into his arms and purr happily?
At any rate, at least Mio has some hope now. Yay, the Marauders Map. Heh, and that little confession is going to come back to bite snape in the... er, snuggle into his arms and purr happily?
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
Thank you so much for this story. I like the new take on how this relationship starts... But i do hope that Harry gets back to normal soon.
read more soon? (I Hope)
Thank you so much for this story. I like the new take on how this relationship starts... But i do hope that Harry gets back to normal soon.
read more soon? (I Hope)
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. What's Hermione doing in what I assume is the boy's dorm? What's Snape doing there? Was he taking a walk and decided to pop into the Gryffindor's boy's dorm for a friendly visit? Your plot is not very well planned, and this is only the first few paragraphs. How many other plot holes await?
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhh I love this chapter, Ron getting what he deserves and yet the plotting continues! love it! (well except for that crazy formatting but thats not a reflection onto your writing!) and cant wait to find out who that mystery person is.
Kit :)
Kit :)
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bleh! I hate it when you think you've put something in right and it goes all mutant on you. Man, Ron is really acting brainless in this fic. Like a stupid thug.
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November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hah, that different from the original i think. That Mio was being controlled was just mentioned in passing before. I hope this time out Har learns about it. I feel sorry for Mio. She was another victim in this after all.
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
'I was distracted by shiny objects and time wasting games.' *hangs head in shame*
NO! No hanging head in shame! None! Shiny things and time wasting games exist for ppl like us to give us something to do between fan fic updates. No shame there.
So, anyone guilty of going and reading the FF version of this story. *raises hand.
Glad i'm not the only one who gives into urges t tweak my old stuff as i go.
NO! No hanging head in shame! None! Shiny things and time wasting games exist for ppl like us to give us something to do between fan fic updates. No shame there.
So, anyone guilty of going and reading the FF version of this story. *raises hand.
Glad i'm not the only one who gives into urges t tweak my old stuff as i go.
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love the whole idea were snape is not the "greasey git" everyone thinks he is.
plz update i cant wait to see what happens next
plz update i cant wait to see what happens next
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow read this last yr sometime on ff.net and im like wait i know this story(with in first few sentences)kinda scared me there for a min thinking someone stole ur awesome story. keep up the awesome job. think ill read it again :)
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First shiny objects are glorious and should always gain individuals attention. Sec love the story