rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy reading this story and look forward to each chapter. I love the fact that I don't have to translate what you write into something that makes sense. There are really so few errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar. There are a few things that I would consider errors but they are so very minor that I barely notice. The biggest one, for me, is the quotation marks you use. I took a whole half page before I got over it and no longer noticed. Conversation is still very clearly marked and the fact that you choose to use a single (') instead of the double (") quotation marks is okay with me. (My HP books all have the standard (") instead of the single that you use.) Please, do keep this in mind: Publishers and editors are not infallible. They make mistakes, too. So don't always depend on their accuracy to maintain your accuracy. That, however, is not why I decided to post a review.

I wanted to thank you for accurate use of the word 'relish'. I can't tell you how many stories I have read, in which a character 'relishes in' something. So I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate being able to enjoy an author who uses a thesaurus. So thank you for that. Geez, I bet you even know how to use a dictionary!

On top of all that, you write a good story - so far anyway! This is the only thing of yours I have read, so I can only judge by what I've read so far. I would love to be added to a notification list if you have one. If you don't, I'd love it if you started one and added me to it. My email is: queen reader 51 @ yahoo dot com. Delete the spaces. Thanks.

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!! It's awesome!!!

poor Mio, she has a lot of apologizing to do. Heh, research party. *snickers. Moony is such a nerd. ^^

ba ba baaaaaan... just as dramatic as the first time round. ^^

AHHH and the truth comes out!!! ahhh so cute! i hope you explain why Lucius doesn't really know what happened! its great story and i cant wait to read more but thank you for updating so fast!
and what were Draco and Lucius drugged with?

please update again soon!

Kit

she deserves to feel awful!
lol, i love how happy Remus is to do research

eeeks!
please keep the amazing updates coming!

first Yeah Canada! WOOOOO...sorry, and second off, i loved it! Snape finally put it all together! so cute. please update again soon!

Kit

ut oh, busted Har. :P
the scene with Corny always makes me lol... he's such a pompous, useless, waste of space little twat. Couldn't happen to a nicer git.

I am resisting, lol, with all that I am, going over to ff.net to see what happens next. You said you changed things a bit from here, so I will be patient. I was wondering when she would remember the map. ;)