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by danniperson

schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, at least we know it wasn't sev dosing har with this that and the other as this was as much of a shock to him as it was to har. still,t hat leaves the question open as to who and why. the rest of it's so very day time tv melodrama. thankyou. i get my dose of soap opera without have to watch the soap ops in questions.
i wonder if the dark mark is making theo more of a total git face than he was or if it's daddy's influence or both.
i'm glad ced is coming to help deal with har. it'll give him and nev a chance to bond.
poor sev, he's just not winning here is he.
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*eyes closed and both fingers crossed* 'jealous Draco... jealous Draco... forget Ginny...

*smacks Snape on the back of the head* can there never be any lasting sweetness?

Since there have been absolutely no benefits from bonding and lots of negative consequences I would think Harry (and Hermione) would be researching ways to break the bond. Several hundred pages and Snape's still being an incredibly cruel jerk.

I'm seriously starting to feel like rooting for Harry and Hermione. They care about each other. Both are bonded to people who don't want to be with them and who care about someone else. And they both will be having a baby that they will need to raise alone.

Now I know that it won't end up that way... but Hermione and especially Harry have been through so much... Draco and Snape should really go through some major groveling before they get a happy ending because right now they just don't deserve it. Jealousy, guilt and intense fear about maybe losing Hermione and Harry should be the least of it.
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Drama. Drama, Drama, Drama. Life is filled with it. I hate Drama in my life I'm sure other do too. Hope things work out in the end for Hermione and Harry. If anything I think them two should get together.
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok... I'm still reading to catch up and I am totally loving this story. But I have to say... I love Malfoy in chapter 17. Him saying that yes is good looking to grace... and how surprised he was to find that Hermione and Ron hadn't slept together... and thinking that it's not so bad being with them... cause he is obviously enjoying himself needling Ron lol. I adore adore adore Malfoy :)
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
chapter 19... hate it hate it hate it hate it... Ginny should NOT be flirting with Draco and asking him to kiss her... and Draco should not be going along with it!!! I here I thought I would actually like Ginny in this story... hate her hate her hate her... hands off! grrr
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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we will now pause while all hell breaks loose.
still, i don't think sev was dosing har so who was, how and when?
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whew... ok I am finally caught up. You are a fan of soap operas aren't you? A little glimpse of each story line and lots of cliff hangers. Of course that makes me want to pull my hair out but I am really liking (and sometimes hating this story). I like Harry's side of things how he isn't going to give up and settle for being treated like Snapes slut. I really hate Snape doing that to him. Maybe they are soul mates because they are both very powerful and it would take someone as stubborn as Harry to eventually get through and change Snape. I was really glad that Harry tried to be gentle with Snape and that made Snape not so happy at knowing Harry was in pain. He should eventually feel really guilty about that! I also find it interesting that he keeps accusing Harry of being just like his father when in fact it's Snape who is the bully. Harry is just trying to not be left feeling so horrible and like a dirty thing.

I really liked Snapes plan to try to get Harry to not want to top. I really really liked how he watched Harry and was so focused on liking his reactions. I hope he'll get to the point where he stops being so mean and just falls asleep with Harry. I think Harry really needs that to not feel so used... and Snape needs it too actually. He might be surprised to find out the benefits of treating Harry nicer.

Now as awesome as that is... I really hate Hermione getting rejected twice and by her soul mate and 'best friend' is just like a punch to the gut. I keep wanting Draco to feel jealous... like finding out that Hermione spends time hanging out with Harry in his bed, or when she put her head on his shoulder... I think Harry is actually her best friend and I like seeing how close they are with each other. I think the soul mates should be jealous of THAT!

*sigh* The way things are going though it seems that Draco will be with Ginny and that just makes them seem so selfish I want them both to just stay far away from Hermione so they don't hurt her anymore. Draco went from trying to prove something to himself to liking Ginny. And Ginny knows how Hermione feels but it's not as important as her own feelings. Wouldn't Draco's mom want Draco and Hermione to be together? But I so hope Hermione doesn't go back to Ron. I think the books were wrong on purpose just like Blaise said... and the bonded pairs really should end up together. Ok I talked way too much but I can't help it!!! I really want happy endings for Harry, Snape and Hermione!
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hah knew it! Hope more is to come soon please.
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The most desired moment has finally come - Harry is preggers! There are no words to describe my joy right now :D:D:D What will old Snapey say to that?! Ha!

Thank you for this chapter. Most pleasurable, especially the end. Don't keep us waiting for too long, please :) I know that writing is a hards stuff, and reading quick and pleasant - the more I admire you for actually writing something.

Take care and keep up with good work!
schedule April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been saving this to read because it's so long and I've just finished the first chapter. I LOVED the first chapter! Awesome with the tension there too!