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November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You do love to leave us hanging'. I am so loving this story. They are so hot together. I just love your Draco..reminds me of someone I love :) More please
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November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, very intersting so far, neat twist with the dream/fantasy thing. and of course ron would have to find his wand, but at least it was ron and he could bullshit his way out of it. keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I reeeally hope that wasn't Ron's voice Harry heard at the end, there. His wand! Aah, I'm dying to know what happens next. Great so far! Thanks for sharing :)
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm interesting very interesting... More please!!
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November 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. I loved that chapter, next one plz! =D
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want future chapters.
btw. this is very well written for a 'first slash fic'.
I hope it wont be just kinky teacher sex but will be about school life of two gay wizard teachers. I mean gay ppl don't just walk with hard on's all day long thinking abot sex. There are bills to pay, jobs to be done and such.Keep that in mind while writing this.That's th eonly pointer I can give you for your story so far.
btw. this is very well written for a 'first slash fic'.
I hope it wont be just kinky teacher sex but will be about school life of two gay wizard teachers. I mean gay ppl don't just walk with hard on's all day long thinking abot sex. There are bills to pay, jobs to be done and such.Keep that in mind while writing this.That's th eonly pointer I can give you for your story so far.
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a promising story. Very good first chapter,a little sad,but good.
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Your writing style is really good and the storyline seems well thought out. For a first Slash-fic this is really amazing.
I can't wait to read more of this.
Your writing style is really good and the storyline seems well thought out. For a first Slash-fic this is really amazing.
I can't wait to read more of this.
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November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW...Just WOW..I love this...It was so so HOT. I wanted to be Harry in the collar at his feet. And what was in that milk! That bit, so perfect. Woot.. More please...don't make us wait!! Your writing is great. I feel like I'm there. It so brings you right into the story. Waiting impatiently for more.