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for Altered Minds COMPLETE

by Suziesu74

schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how but I missed a chapter. One where Harry and Lucius have sex! Like I would want to miss that! The sex scene was great by the way.
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD poor Harry, just can't catch a break can he? I look forward to more!
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sounds like harry's picking up some of tom's more commanding quirks. and i love teh bit about him wanting to fuck luc, but fuck with sev's head. and the scene with luc and harry was very intense adn hot. keep up the great work, can't wait for the next bit :)
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH UPDATTTEEE PPPPLLLLLLSSS!
person Seraphiccandy21
schedule December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its nice that you have returned to smut. Love the idea and as usually your sex scenes are very well written and very enjoyable. However I have to wonder at a few points mostly with the last chapter. I thought the door slightly open part was very contrived( unless they planned it??)...oh waaaaaaaaaaaait...they put the memories in his head because they want him right?I see what you did there. Thats how he got to see Sevs POV as well. Luc and Sev wanted a Harry Sandwitch and they did it by implanting their memories in his head?? Okay so now the only point that needs explaining is why Voldie was still good looking teh first time he shagged Sev...and Lucius come to think of it. Book says he changed shape right after he left school.
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely loving this!! Pppplease continue!!!*whines
person jujukittychick
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
leave it to sev to be an ass about things, at least luc seems to be amenable to listening. and i loved th portrait trying to save harry's virtue lol. and busted! poor harry, wonder what sev's going to do to him now. keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next :D
person Jen
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was mean!! I have to know how this is all gonna work out. I think I've got another new story I'm addicted to, now that you finished Pandora's Box. I can't wait until Harry can finally get some hot, rough man-lovin'.
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty, Harry!
schedule November 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, ppl who feel sorry for Har. raise your hands. *both my hands go up.
whats even worse than having that kinda crap in your head?... having snape cast doubts upon a sanity thats already wobbly. way harsh, snape, seriously.