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for Altered Minds COMPLETE

by Suziesu74

schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More pllease!
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
winces... really, sev aught to make sure of the memories har has just experienced before he provokes him. Still, what an interesting response... and what a startling revelation for har. This is great stuff.
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry, now even his dreams are mirroring current reality. another great chapter, and he's finally coming to terms with what he wants...sort of lol that's a lot of anger the two of them are goign to have to work through, and poor lucius stuck in the middle, and not in the fun way lol. keep upthe great work, can't wait for more :)
schedule December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NICE. Oh they both have their secret lusts don't they. awesome.
schedule December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
....And you leave us with THAT?!

NOT OKAY!!!!!!!!!!

Seriously, I'm freaking out here! I need more! Do I have to grovel to get an update?

Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update this soon!

Oh, and also, SEVERUS! NAUGHTY, NAUGHTY BOY! *wicked smirk* I love it.
person Jacob
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update, pretty please? :)
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what was that song called? Oh yeah, 'it wasn't me'. lol, it could practically be there theme song. When in doubt, deny, deny, deny. Kind of hard to deny those sorts of memories though. How are you gonna try and wiggle out of this one sev? :P
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol i love your snape and harry interactions, they're just so antagonistic. and harry's little day dreams were very hot. another wonderful chapter, keep up the good work :)
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
intersting lol I wonder when harry will relizwes other secrets too? hmmmm. so wait is sev going to leave luc for harry.
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can that even be possible? I also feel like I missed a few chapters....