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ack! how can you leave it like that, you evil evil author, no cookies for you :p great chapter though, very hot there in the middle and yah, heavy on the angsting what with draco's convo with harry and his little vision. sev and luc are gonna be hard pressed to make up for this one. keep up the great work, can't wait for more :)

I love trying new things don't you? I think you pulled this one of just fine. I look forward to more. ^_^

Don't kill Harry. All your games will end. Ginny did not like this. HEhe. Poor Draco, he is so going to need therapy

snickers... bye draco indeed. why should they have to explain.
wow, ginny is the one acting sick here.

yay for more smut *cough* i mean story!;) great chapter, and i freaking loved draco "nonono! stop that" poor boy's gonna be traumatized lmao. and poor ginny, meaning well but with no clue as to what harry really needs and wants. and those poor aurors, having to deal with a screaming, upset ginny. and the sex was hot as always. great job, keep it up, can't wait to see more :)

Mmm Mmm Good! Yummy threesome! I knew they'd get there eventually. Ahhh yes and the rest of the world intrudes once again. THIS should be fun to explain to the aurors. Draco, stop wrecking the afterglow!

Heh I'm glad that I can help corrupt- I mean guide, another person to the deliciously dark and wicked side. Our cookies are FAR better then those low cal fatfree 'light cookie' things I promise. You and I simply MUST start chatting, email me emeraldfairy18@hotmail and I can introduce you to some other fun kinky things to use on your boys.

That was just HOT! Draco finding them OOPS. That would be a cock blocker.

Omg I died laughing at the end of chapter 10 this fic is amazing great job dude.

well BUGGER. and it was all going so wellllllllllllllll. *wails.

LOL. I was about to stop reading right before I got to Sev's mention of a safeword. You took a while getting around to that. It had me scared for a few moments when the breathplay started without a safeword (or nonverbal indicator for times when speaking is not an option), because as a member of the Lifestyle, I've seen too many BDSM fics that do without, and I can never read them for very long. The whole time my mind is going "but there's no safeword! Is this even consensual?!"

Glad to see you're doing it right, because I am LOVING this fic to no end! It's hotter than all hell, and I'm coming to love the idea of Luc submitting to Harry.