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for Tempus

by Suziesu74

schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved how this ended!!! I loved seeing all the snapshot scenes from different points in his life. I also really loved how Snape told Harry that he shouldn't get married and then he said that he didn't want to wait anymore. Really great way to end this. I loved the whole story idea and how we got to see a younger Snape. Thanks so much for finishing!!!
schedule January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good update. Final update. It's over. NOOOOO! But I admit I was a lil confused as he was getting his memories straightened. But I am glad everything worked out in the end. I hope you continue to make more of this couple in the future please. Best of luck.
person Leania07
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I got a bit teary! Oh please say that Sev remembers and is still alive. Harry will just be worse off if he returns to his 'present' and Sev is still gone, along with everyone else. Damn, I wonder how Dumbledore treated Harry through his time at school, if it was any different. Oh, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Leania
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read all of this story and I soo totally love this!!! Sev is my fav. character and your whole story is just wonderful. You put the background tragedy of all the 'what ifs' and 'what has to be' throughout your story and made it very special and intense. Like everything was heightened... and well... intense!

When the story began I was a bit disappointed (not in the story but in Harry himself lol) that Harry gave off a bit of a perv vibe. Really great job of getting me right into the story and believing in them as people and not characters so much so that I wanted to tell Harry to behave lol. I love how crazy he is for Sev and the memories that keep coming to him.

Sooo looking forward to what comes next.
person heartstar
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh No Wowo I want more please tell me yuou will be updating soon please thank you
person jj
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please let there be more. I love this story! Its awesome!!
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgggggggggggggg you are so so so so so so so so so so so cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was amazing, but please update soon or else I'll go crazyyyyyy :(
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
dammit. given the chance to change things for the better and dumbles has to stick his bloody ore in. talk about heart sickening.
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omggg...amazing! can't wait for the next update :)
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good grief, what a mess. I'm sure remi would be able to smell what har was doing anyway. Not sure how he's going to explain this one.