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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good start! I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
xoxo,
kitkat
xoxo,
kitkat
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I await more when you can thank you.
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ok, kinda confusing, was this chapter a flash back? if so u should do something to idicate it. also, harry's eyes are green, not brown^.^ other than that, loving the new chapter and i cant wait for the ext update~~
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To all the idiot reviewers so far, if you had read the Authors Note at the top, you would have seen "I intend to start the story from scratch - not to start it with this first chapter. However, feel free to read through if you want an idea of the concept that will be present later in the story." So really, don't complain that the first two chapters contradict each other -.-
I can't believe your adopting this story as well, when there is such a popular version out! That takes some balls! I like that ^.^ I'll be sure and fallow this story. It will be very interesting to see how different people take the same basic idea.
I can't believe your adopting this story as well, when there is such a popular version out! That takes some balls! I like that ^.^ I'll be sure and fallow this story. It will be very interesting to see how different people take the same basic idea.
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice start to things, interested in seeing what direction you take this. keep up the good work :)
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! I hope he gets revenge.
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
first and 2nd chappies kind of contradicted each other... a lot. I like a good Drackon tale though... so hopefully it gets better. Is the first chappie only there as an idea base?
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The first two chapters contradicted each other a bit. Also, it's a bit odd that you and Starlight Massacre both adopted the same story...