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please up date XD

Oh interesting so far, now has Harry indeed reached his creature inheritance at 16 and is hiding it as of right now? Because nothing has been mentioned since the first chapter (or introduction), and I just wanted to clarify. Keep up the good job and I await the next chapter.

Leania

yay, glad to see another chapter! so charlie's one of harry's mates huh? that ought to make things intersting, of course neither one knows it yet i'm assuming lol. and i really liked the plan for appearing to be random muggles, very nicely thought out and gave us time to get some of charlie's mindset. keep up the great work, i look forward to seeing more of this :)

Oh this really sounds wonderful and I really love what you have up so far so please keep it up.

I'm pretty interested so far. ;) It's pretty ballsy of you to adopted this when someone else already put out a fairly popular version of it (Which, I have to say I've read and reread it in its entirety at least a a dozen times.), but everyone is different and hopefully soon you'll be able to make us stop comparing the two. ;) I've read the reviews so far, and personally, I would just take out the first chapter that you adopted off of, not many people read the author notes. :/ I actually REALLY like your depiction of the Dursley's abuse, I feel like it's all too often over shadowed, even by J.K. Rowling herself, so props for that! I'm also very interested to see if he will be Dom or Sub and who he's mates will be. Another thing that's going to be tough to compete with. ;) I'm pretty much in love with Nasta and Max from ROTD. I don't mean to keep harping about another story in YOUR review, but you must understand that because it IS so popular it's going to be some TOUGH competition. :) I can't wait to read more!! <3

I love this sofar more please...

Again, I am loving this~ definitaly explains more. But if he had his 16th birthday in the first chapter, why is he now 17. And where did the changes he went through go? Still good either way~ sorry it's short, my computer died and I am cured fly on my iPod until it' s fixed...

This is very intresting is very intresting is ti going to have the same pairing as the other stoires DmHpBZ or are you planning sothing different somthign rare? Oh no matter what you are planning I am sure this story is going to be amazing so please keep it up and update it again as soon as you can becasue so far this story is really intresting and has me at the edge of my seat eager for more.

another very nice chapter, i liked seeing petunia standing up to vernon. glad to see an update, keep up the good work :)

Okay, this story has been done before. I hope you make a radical change to the story or else everyone will always compare it to the successful alternate story. Can I make a request? Make Harry the Dominate. I am tired of all these Submissive!Harrys and even "Rise of the Drackens" I am no longer able to read. Please keep your chin up and forge your own story and have fun with this.
~LordGeovanni *Kupo*