rate_review Reviews

Woah, woah!

I am not really into mystery novels, but your story sure is interesting!

I really look forward to the rest of the fics.

Each new case makes me more anxious. Just who is the Phantom (as I'll call the blue-eyed twisted now)?
What is he scheming? Is he waiting for the Socrates Department to eliminate all rivals or what?
I mean Phantom just showed up when the next hint or twisted was in reach....

I just really hope Harry doesn't give in to the temptation. But I guess that makes him and Draco even then, huh?

I don't think Harry will be able to hide his "infatuation" with Draco for much longer. Lionel did strike me as being somewhat dense that he didn't notice Harrys crush on him. Draco however just WILL notice. He isn't a sneaky Slytherin for nothing! :D

I'll leave you a review again sometime soon, either at #12 or between.

Greetings, Heartless93

Aww..is that the end??? :-(

WELL then...I thought it ended on a good note, confesssions were made,
Harry kicked arse AND Draco has to pray to Merlin for patience, until
Harry makes up his mind.

In other words, just your usual 'exasperating day in the life of'...anyway
see you in the next story.

about #11...

1. It's official...a flirtatious Draco is a cute Draco, though he
wouldn't exactly like the word 'cute'. :-) I must admit if Draco
dropped anymore hints they would have been bombs.

2. As I was reading the conversation between Harry & Leah...and the
reluctance to mention the 'Other-Who-Shall-Not-Be-Named', I thought
is it possible that HARRY could come up with an idea of using different
words that refers to Old Blue Eyes, while speaking about him? That way
whatever so called link Leah thinks OBE might have won't be...activiated
or whatever.

3. By the way, good ending....AND did u mention that you had another author's
name here?

about #10...

*reads last two lines of paragraph & actually emits a fangirl squeal* I'm sorry, I know
you want a detailed commentary on how this chapter was [it was GOOD!], but reading the fact
that Draco now knows how Harry feels makes me wonder how you'll do the next scene.

Will you have Draco drop hints of his own? Will Draco act coy? Though a coy-acting Draco is
ALWAYS good, nothing like a good love game. :-)

How about acting coy AND dropping hints?

Oh! But I DO have to mention something about dear Alex...do I smell auror?

about #9...

1. Well, I don't know about anybody else, but I'M glad Harry's visions
will be helful in some way...hopefully.

2. "Thank you, Lady Yelton," Draco, and he knew that she knew that he knew she didn't deserve the title,
-okay, you know what, you should go ahead & do a oneshot crack fic....and just 'he knew/she knew' to your
heart's content. ;-)

3. I actually can't wait for the kiss that I KNOW is coming, but knowing you, you're not going to
let it be simple & sweet. Naw, you'll complicate things, make folks doubt themselves AND go the ackward
route, instead of just making it sweet & simple. Can't you do sweet & simple? :-)

about #8...

I liked this chapter, it's the first time I've seen them bounce ideas
off each other, *gasp* as if they were partners! :-)

...and their reading each other works wonders for me, too. Keep it
coming!

again with the death defying stuff Har. Still, this time he's got a good reason and this time his 'little crush' might well be reciprocated. Oh, now that is scary. Being able to infect other? shivers.
blue eyes must be an utter nutter if he thinks that's a good thing.

about #6..

What was the vision you were looking for?
-oh you know, those 'you're-going-down-a-dark alley-then-OH MY GOSH-something-surprises-and-try-to-harm-you'
visions that Harry have. :-)

Anyway, I will say this, if Draco doesn't become Head Auror after reading this chapter, I'm
kicking the author's behind!

about #5...

This is my 3rd time trying to review..

1. Then Draco stirred and murmured, opening grey eyes with a soft haze of sleep across them, and asked,