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lol those letters were fun to read... esp. bellatrix!she's scary!

oh, i am very much looking forward to the fall out from all those letters. Luc and dear bell bell can go rot.
Ickle ronnie kinds too.
Those poor girls. I hope Snape can do something for them.

lol and looks like you figured out a way to pull our wonderful forge and gred into things *yay*. didn't realize how far behind in this story i was, i'm so glad to see more of it. you've done a great job with the pacing of everything though i think mione's reaction to her father's death has been underplayed unless you're planning on having her have a break down later. and i love that the boys keep getting interrupted when things start to get good, poor things lol. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)

Oh it's going to get worse... Ron is going to make a mess of things! I do hope Ron eventually gets a clue and is able to remain friends with Harry. I think Harry would blame himself if Ron goes too far and does irreparable damage to their friendship.

Please update chapter 24 soon ^_^

I'm glad Sev will eventually come around. Maybe mio, gin and luna should get in on the pranking as well. Ronnikins is being a total butt munch. I've only read one fic where the twins were picking on har and it just didn't sit right, know what i mean?
As for Bella's brat, i hope she either loses it or gets a bad case of dead and it goes to someone more deserving. I don't know if it'll survive with her as a mother.
Do they know how they're going to get 'Cissa back to hogwarts yet?

I think I need to read more of this... no, I KNOW I need to read more of this! I can't wait to find out what the deal with Snape is! You have written this incredibly well, usually I'm not into stories where Ron is THIS much of an ass, but honestly, with the overall tone, it totally works! So excited for your next update!!!

I've seen this around a bit and finally got around to reading it and i'm seriously kicking myself for not reading it earlier. this is GOOD!

First off... hells bells Luc is truly a prize bastard. Why the HELL did Cissa stay with him. Love him or not what is she, a door mat?! Kudos to Sev for getting her out. I swear though, if she tries to go back to him after, i'll AK her myself for being to stupid to live.

Har and Draco are just soooooo sweet. Ron and Sev both are just going to have to deal.

I'm glad Nev is a major player in this one. often he only gets bit parts or is over looked altogether, which is a pity cause his character has a lot to give i think.

I dun even wanna know what sort of horrors a mad bella would inflict on her child. poor thing really hasn't got a hope, even if it survives until birth.

anyway, looking forward to the next chappie.

She's not dead!!! Oh thank goodness!!! One over on Lucius!!!

That was wonderful!!!!