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I have only read two chapters and I am utterly hooked! I love it. Excellent and economical use of language, powerful writing style. Reminds me a little of the way JK writes, but with a little more visceral strength. Very, very good.

sexual correction potion? oh, that bodes extremely bad things.
i can understand why cissy might be dubious, she was out of the loop for the duration.
wow, luc really is a prize bastard... going after bellabitch. he'd willing shack up with a complete nutter? I do hope he's planning on letting the house elves raise the kid cause nutty as bell bells is, she'd kill it. babies are such fragile things.
oh, yay... sigh, Tom really knows how to make a problem of himself neh? so, he's essentially made himself a potter? Which means har as the current head of the house needs to straighten him out? How the hells blazing hinges is he supposed to do that? Still, kudos for a rather unique approach. haven't come across that idea before.

Ron is such a moron. It's not like Harry cheated on him. Anyways, I hope Harry tells them all, except Draco, to go screw themselves. Because Harry and Draco belong together, Harry and Ginny together is just gross. Can't wait for more.

oh, oh, oh. Ronnikins just raised stupid to an art form. he should have the L for loser branded on his forehead. He pretty much just sold his so called 'best friend' out there and put everyone in massive amounts of danger. seriously, he should be in slyth with his lack of loyalty and back stabbing skills.
I hope he gets payback reigned down on him HARD.
ohhhh, drarry limons. Yummy.
and Cissa's awake Yay! x 3

Ron doesn't care who he puts in danger! He needs a wake up call!

Oh I finally caught up on this one! Wow, so a lot of tension still between Sev and Harry; don't foresee that ending any time soon hmm? Glad Harry and Draco have admitted to each other that they belong together, I hope Narcissa will be okay. Ron's really a prick isn't he. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!

Leania

Right. I'll just say these first. I thought of a few potentially troulbesom things it the 'lets keep luc and so Voldi out of the loop re Cissa and Malfoy jr, mk 2 still living thing'. Old blood family tapestries a re self up dating yeah? they also have the deadies date of death? So, when Cissa pops her latest progeny, won't the malfoy tapestry say so? also, if luc attempts to re marry, he's going to have trouble, since his mrs isn't dead yet... though not for his and dear Bell Bells lack of trying. lets just hope luc doesn't feel in the mood to go strolling down memory lane. >>

As for Ronickinss... good grief, Moody the Younger in the making and how. Could he get any more paranoid or conspiracy theory-iest? I'm with Mio, definite forebodings for the future. Malfoy has the right of it, stick with Har like glue... like that'll be a hardship. ^^

Got to admire Snape's guts. takes serious moxy to play and keep playing a homicidal nut job like V... and not get sprung. Is V aware of Har's link yet? (makes note to re read story. sorry if this is a bit incoherent but I'm on a time limit and my head is killing me.)

Uh oh!!! Sounds like trouble surrounds them!

Ron you twit... you better not succeed in hurting Draco!

yay for more story, and i actually loved all the little letters from everybody, especially the twins "yes, -how- is he?" *snicker*. can't wait for more :D