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for To Become Whole Again

by TibbytheWitchy

person Tesgura
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG so Draco is Godric's heir and Harry is Sal's? There's a twist. Also, no! Don't kill me! Just update more please!
person yamiyugi
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this story is going. Thank you for letting me know when you updat and please keep letting me know.
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person djaddict
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*dangles bunch of carrots*

Definitely enjoying. Love Harry's little panic attack!! lol

Oh so many questions. Want to know so many things. Please be nice! lol
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man i just can't help but love this story.....i need more...what was in the diary.....what did severus have to do to get dumbledork to accpet and trust him...so many questions....please update soon oh, and my email is latriceguillory@hotmail.com please add me to your update list...great chapter.
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay to the idea of making like mad minks! I always love an evil Dumbles story. By the way, you wrote #5 Privet Drive. It's 4. I mean, you know that, but you might want to edit.
person Tesgura
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, he smiled! I always look forward to the 'bringing down Dumbledore' scene, but with this story I'm more looking forward to the after. Can't wait to see what's next!
person djaddict
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm. Very interesting. Can't wait for more
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
could you possible alert me when you update please? thanks. aisling dot s at gmail dot com :)
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this, I can't wait for more!!!
Now if only I could figure out where the post buttion is I would be able to post a new chap to mine...
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, intriguing. Can't wait to see what this plan is that Dumbledore has and how it's thwarted. I do hope it's thwarted.

The sex scene was great. Can't wait until Draco thoroughly claims Harry. From the way Harry was acting, I think he can't either.