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for To Become Whole Again

by TibbytheWitchy

schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I like the choice of creature. This should be interesting. I also like the budding friendship with Nagini. Question: are you saying that verisateum (sp?) causes infertility or that one just shouldn't get pregnant while taking it?
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow so that's how he started trusting him.....this is such a great story...i'll be waiting for more.
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this^.^ the way you portray everyone really draws the reader in!!! keep up the awesome work and i cant wait for the next chapter ^.^
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait for an update!! Lots and lots of updates! :D Oh, and if you'd like a beta, let me know! email me at loonylovelyluna@hotmail.com
person djaddict
schedule November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot! claiming!!!

If your bunnies don't like carrots, I could find them some sweet alfalfa!! lol
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I can't wait to see what happens next.

xoxo,
kitkat
person yamiyugi
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are like the only one on this site that updates theirs stories. If other do it take them way to long to update and some just never do. Thanks for keeping me on the list and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
puffin
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh hot stuff there...i am so glad that draco finally claimed harry...oh great chapter....i want more.
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i hate reviewing on affnet. its such an annoying system, but since i loved the chapter..... :)
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that. I just see the address and my brain jumps to the closest thing it knows.

Great claiming. Love it! And I totally laughed my head off at the thought of Salazar and Godric getting it on in a portrait in Dumbles office.