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for To Become Whole Again

by TibbytheWitchy

person Leania07
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* Poor Draco, walking in on that! He's lucky Harry's attached to him, or else she may have hexed his bits. Sev couldn't figure out Harry was preggers, really? First thing I would've though of, lol, but that's me. Guess he's got to be clueless sometimes, hmm? Can't be a know-it-all (or insufferable know-it-all). I await the next, and I'll also check out your friends story too.

Leania
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good sex can hurt. But it keeps a smile on the face.
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant and Horny. Draco is in such trouble. Tom and Lucius will tear Dumbles and Minny new assholes for touching Sev. Evil child. Someone may spank you>>>>
person djaddict
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If you kill or severely maim Severus, I'm never speaking to you again!

Evil, evil woman!
person CamoBuni
schedule January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
:3 I looove feeding the review bunnies! I think you might wanna do a side chapter of Atari/Luna's relationship if you ever hit writers block. I personally adore Luna.
person CamoBuni
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey. it's shelley. You better not ever stop writing this. <_< Or I'll stab you like...37 times with a spoon.
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
another knock out i always knew that harry liked it a lil' rough.....great job
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just tell the plot bunnies to not be too bad. Harry could use some gentle loving next time. But this was so smutty goodness
person djaddict
schedule January 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Evil. Yep, that's what you are. Why can't you smack the baddies to satisfy your urges? lol
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was a very good chapter...I love a possessive Draco makes it a very good read...great job and I look forward to more