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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very nice fic so far, great job with portraying sev's thoughts and feelings about things. can't wait to see what happens next, does something happen with draco, and i imagine there'll be at least a few more scenes with him and lucius, and what exactly is he going to wind up watching harry do. keep up the good work :)
oh, one small thing, in ch.4 i think it was, you had Lupus, the name was Remus Lupin, i think you squished them ;)
oh, one small thing, in ch.4 i think it was, you had Lupus, the name was Remus Lupin, i think you squished them ;)
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November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
indeed. there is going to be much wanking involved... It'll be interesting to see if he does more than that.
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh my... poor luc will never be the same again... i suppose there are fem dom's but i seriously doubt an upper crust well bred lady like Cissa would be the type. Whether he means to or not Sev is going to enjoy this. it should be interesting to see how Har is tossed into the mix later and maybe bit's of draco as well. did har return Draco's wand yet?
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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story!
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, not another Slave Harry story. I'm sick of those. :(
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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I suppose the timing was a bit out but I could just see Snapes oh so slyth self glamoured or otherwise made over in the roll of new dada professor. Ah well, guess it just isn't meant to be. :P
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November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, that explains the Sev and Luc angle at least.
I hope Luc doesn't take to much outta Sev's hide. It's not like he could do much about psycho Morte's treatment of Luc.
Can't wait to see how Har ties in.
I hope Luc doesn't take to much outta Sev's hide. It's not like he could do much about psycho Morte's treatment of Luc.
Can't wait to see how Har ties in.
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am actually enjoying this story. I like that you have given a new ending to the actual books and have essentially made it your own.
Please update soon! I would like to know what happens next! :D
-MooChew
Please update soon! I would like to know what happens next! :D
-MooChew
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh Luc would have HATED that! it'll be interesting to how Har ends up in snape's hands... or vice verse. either way is good. ^^
It'll also be interesting seeing what circumstance would induce either man to share their partner. Snape at least is a possessive sort.
It'll also be interesting seeing what circumstance would induce either man to share their partner. Snape at least is a possessive sort.
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice