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for End of Obsession

by Juwel

schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
snort. so draco's going to be an A plus libertine? ah well, it's a power of as sort isn't it and draco could really use the confidence boost. but damn, so could Har. i hope sev or someone is in a position to help him soon. He's a mess.
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor snape, malfoys throwing themselves at him left and right and the one he wants completely out of reach and in need of someone to look after him. loved the scene with draco, it was very nicely done. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
schedule December 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
go Draco!
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh dear, he's not doing well at all. I hope snape doesn't leave it to long before he claims Har or that Har manages to get off his but and do something, like returning Malfoy's wand.
At the moment, it's all bleak and black for har.
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor harry. good thing snape's still there to provide some actual direction...well as soon as he lets harry know he's still alive anyway lol. great story so far, very emotional and intense and i can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work :)
schedule December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is killer so far!
person Seraphiccandy21
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
knowing there are great writers like you out there gives me a reason to get up in the morning . Seriously, Winters killing me and well-written smut is my only fuel...
schedule December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting. There's a fine balance between being a Master and being a monster but Sev is used to walking fine lines so I think he can swing it. Saw a few typos in there so be careful of that... also, in that instance, I think it was he LAY down, rather than he LAID down. It's just a minor thing but i think it's rapidly becoming a pet peeve of mine. sorry. :S
Can't wait for Har to get tossed in the mix.
person Seraphiccandy21
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story! plz update soon!!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am reeeeally enjoying this, the Snape/Lucius at the side is just amazing. Pllllease continue, and I am disappointed as to why you haven't gotten more reviews, it is more than worth it.