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for End of Obsession

by Juwel

person Usagi
schedule January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I must say I was sceptical about this story to begin with and mainly read it because of the warnings. You summery doesn't seem to do it justice. It's a great story, original theme and wounderfully written. You did a great job villianizing Rita Skeeter, making the reader really hate her effin guts. I also LOOOOOVE the tender moment between Snape and Harry when Snape stops him from killing himself, it really shows you a human and gentle side of the usually stotic and cold man. All in all a beautiful story and I can't wait for the next chapter, my only problem, need's a better summary.
person Jax
schedule January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Typos aside, I'm REALLY enjoying this story. Very much looking forward to seeing where it goes from here. :)
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well Finally. i was beginning to think it was never going to happen. pity it took har's near suicide to snapes rear into gear. to be able to have both luc and har as subs... what a lovely contrast. talk about having your cake...
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oooh very nice, sev certainly knows how to push harry's buttons. of course poor harry's going to start thinking something's wrong with him i'm sure if sev doesn't start letting him reciprocate. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
person pammy
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whew thank u for that update i needed it! This is my fav story so far. I can only imagine harrys jealously if he finds out about snape and draco...oh lord. Wonder how this will play out. Looking forward to the ride. Loved the new spell! Take care
person Pennfold
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An exceptional chapter, I look forward to see how there relationship progresses.
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay, sev to the rescue! and poor harry, but at least he finally got to release allt hat pent up hurt and frustration though sev's satin top may never recover lol and i think it's confirmed that harry's bent now, and very happily so. that was very intense and hot, and i can just see sev getting even more obsessed than he already was with a needy harry there and willing to learn with apparent sub affinities. yeah, sev's screwed lol. and the bit about the mirror, a bit of fore-shadowing? kind of afraid to see the fallout from that one. keep up teh great work, can't wait to see what happens next :)
person Sera21
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! Was wondering tho why Harry didn't wonder why Severus had burst in had such a fortuitous moment...
person Camorgan
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That was such a terrible cliff hanger! I love this story so much. Snape's obsession with Harry is damn hot.

I eagerly await your next chapter!

Wonderful work!

Zeledus
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Sev will help him turn himself around.