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for End of Obsession

by Juwel

person Anon
schedule April 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see another chapter! Excellent as always! But now I have to be sad that you're taking a break from this. T_T (not really. I fully support a well-balanced life!)

When you come back to it I hope we get to see another chapter from Snape's POV!
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my. i wonder how sev will respond to that... oh, please, please, please, with nekkid sev's and harry's on the top, with smouldering, red hot, juicy D/s lemons?
>> what? a girl can hope.
person Leania07
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh the date went well, and Harry survived with his sanity! So if someone was to kill a person in their animagus form, like Skeeter in her bug form (fitting, too), and claimed unaware that they were a witch/wizard in an animagus form, would they still be sent to Azkaban for murder of a witch/wizard, or not? If not, then squish the damn bug! I wonder how things will play out now, with Lucius and what not. Another wonderful chapter, I await the next!!

Leania
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it'll be interesting to see how this plan goes up, since they're dumping a couple of wheelbarrow loads of bricks on the wizarding public all at once. It's a pretty bold plan and it should work. looking forward to next chappie.
person Anon
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is a tease! What happens next!?
person KarenLioncourt
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant :D
person SyndleMarie
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You need to update! This date is either going to be flawless or a total disaster (I'm hoping for the latter) and will be absolutely fabulous when you get up here. Keep up the good work!
person KarenLioncourt
schedule February 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love it:) Havent smiled this much in a while. You write well.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope your life straightens out and you're able to de-stress soon (and not just because I'm eager for the next chapter)! I love your subtle developing of characters and their emotions, not to mention the small details that make your writing sexy. The moment Snape pulled at Harry's collar was hot! I can imagine how my stomach would leap if I experienced that.

I'm really curious about how the date will go. Hopefully well with an especially delightful ending! I must say I am more interested in the Lucious fallout, and Draco's reaction to his godfather stealing his crush. The scenes between Snape and Lucious were steamy, does Snape really need to give him up now?

Okay, those are my thoughts. Keep up the good work!
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww, harry's so cute and awkward but i like how sev actually took time to consider his requests, asking for explanations before outright rejecting. though the "it's burgundy!" i can just hear the absolute -horror/disgust- in his voice as he said it lmao. another great chapter, keep it up :)