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February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. So the parents become slaves to Aphrodite's will and have no say in what their children's education. Sounds exactly how Soviet Russia and Nazi Germany operated.
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February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, this story is interesting, and thank goodness for Draco the twins are there too (I'm pretty happy about the yaoi too btw). I wonder when they get back to school if Ron will try to seduce Harry.
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January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
basically all i'm saying is when you shift sceens or start from a different persons perspective put a double gap or a dotted line or something so people know that. Otherwise, like i said, it's super confusing.
Wow, how many seals has poor tia got?!
Wow, how many seals has poor tia got?!
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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey can I ask just who are femharry's( or would it be his sister?) mates are I mean is it the twins and draco or is there someone else? ...and just what type of creature is she...oh I can't wait to find our please keep this up.
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January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like but what killed dudley?
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December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
still going good but you need something to mark when a new situation is happening, other wise it all runs together and is horribly confusing.
something like a double space or a small dotted line.
something like a double space or a small dotted line.
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Two things, you keep using "since" when it should be "sense," and "merry" when it should me "marry" Other then that, the story is good.
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December 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so good. I eagerly await your next chapter. Please let me know when you have the next chapter up.
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
plz write more