rate_review Reviews

I would like to request either Pansy or Hermione as a female mate for Tia.

i love this story and i cant wait to see who the new mate is i kinda hope its a girl!

this is seriously great and I love how take chare your harry was please keep it up because I reallly can't wait to see what you have planned next and who you have planned to be the next/last mate.

Spell check. SPELL. CHECK. And I don't mean check for spells - before you post - hit that button in word (under 'review') where it says review spelling and grammar. Every time it comes up with a query on a name eg. lucious - change it to the CORRECT SPELLING OF THAT NAME - i.e. lucius - not luscious. Google a list of names or something if you're not sure. Every word derived from the roman - e.g. severus, lucius, flavius, julius (etc) end in an us - not an ous. Spellcheck should pick up things like leied (laid) - names, you will have to look up. E.g. Percival - not percivle. But if you add the correct version, you will never again have them wrong after spell check.
I can normally ignore a fair few spelling mistakes when i'm reading but there are just TOO DAMN MANY here. It's ruining the reading experience.
The story would otherwise be very interesting and enjoyable if not for that.
And i'm not really a spelling nazi but there are limits!!

As much as I love this story, this latest chapter was a bit confusing. I mean, first off, it was just hard to read due to a lack of spaces between lines. But first Tia is very hostile towards Ron and Hermione and suddenly less so? I get that she was pretending to be Harry but still, it was rather odd. I was actually confused to the point where I thought they were getting along and I had missed something. It also seemed a bit rushed and I wish the explanation of Dumbledore had been a bit more.

Other then that it was a good chapter and I look forward to more.

I'm guessing (since I haven't checked my e-mail since this morning and there wasn't a chapter to read yet) but I think Blaise. Don't know why, but it just fits; either way, regardless who it is, it'll be such a wonderful party!

Leania

Enjoying it so far, sent off that e-mail today. I've been busy past few days getting things straightened out, but should be smoothed out within the next week. I figured it'd be Ollie, but the question is is that all of them, or is there more? And can we say bedroom party??!! Woot! Is there going to be a female or is it all males?

Sure thing, I don't mind! I love feeling useful, and seeing as the other author I'm helping has life interruptions, I'm currently idle. You've been doing a wonderful job thus far, having dyslexia, I've heard, can be a real pain to deal with. I don't remember how an acquaintance of mine in college dealt with it, but I think she said her's was mild.
Yay for usefulness!

Leania

*squeals* yay for getting Siri back!!!! I can't wait for Papa Tom's reaction to this news!!!

Interesting, but I must ask, do you have a beta? There's a few spelling errors, left out letters, and other grammatical errors. Example: ...donation from Harry no matter what the mutt says the goblin will do as I say.