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This was awesome, really hot stuff. That said, I'm deeply saddened that there's no continuation, instead, you shipped Draco/Hermion...as if this site needed any more Draco fics. I wonder what changed, in this fic you had Hermione state (mentally) that Harry was different "unlike some Slytherin reject" that's a broad characterization, implying that any Slytherin would be a reject. Eh, oh well.

I love it,,, PLEASE do more of this story!!!! It is great

You come back and write more!!!! ;)

btw I LOVED that song!! I still listen to it, it's a classic. Good taste lady!

I really enjoyed it! I'm not COMPLETELY Harry/Hermoine but on a whim I decided to read something. I'm glad I picked something good! ;) I would be interested in a sequel. There is so much left you could tell!
Thanks for sharing!
SW
p.s. Since I don't read H/Hr often, if you do write a sequel would you please email me and let me know? Thanks!

Hi! I've never been one for H/Hr fanfiction but on a whim, I decided to give it a try. I'm really impressed with your writing style! And amazingly, you bring H/Hr into the realm of real possibility. I find myself in this strange in between place with them...in between "they are very close in a sibling way" and "they are very close as man and woman in love kind of way". Your story really brings out the possibility and I enjoyed it. :) I do hope you continue with this. I would like to see how they take to making love and if, in that moment, Hermione realizes, such as Harry seems to have just now, that she is in love with him in that "lifetime" kind of way. I would also like to see what happens after the War. Does Ron come back? How does this new relationship affect the Weasleys? Also...I can completely see them chalking their passion up to a "heat of the moment" indescretion...a kind of "we could die and I don't want to die without experiencing love" kind of slip up. It HAS been eluded to already in this story. ...Anyway, overall, I give this a "10" for writing style, clarity of plot line, and character interpretation. Thank you so much for sharing!
p.s. I did notice one discontinuity you should fix: in one chapter you mentioned that Hermione may not be wearing a bra but in the next it is revealed that she is wearing one (a matching emerald green panty set). The way it was phrased led me to expect that she was indeed, NOT wearing one so it's possible others had the same idea. Although I did really like the idea that Hermione wanted to undress for Harry and Harry's realization of this.
Thanks again for posting!
SarahWhitman

I really hope ur not ending it there. But very well written chapter :)

love, love, love, love, LOVE and ADORE this!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!! <3

interesitng, shame oyu only write dramione (I've read so many bad fics with that pairing that I'm jaded to it)

I loved this! It was really great :) I hope you write more