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for To Those Who Wait

by KJmom827

schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story and I love it! I would love to see a continuing pervy chapter filled with yummy smutty goodness, but I can be content with the awesomeness that is this.
person Night Owl
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn. *whew* I like it. ;) I know this works great as a one-shot, but if there happened to be any sort of continuation, I would definitely approve as well. Either way, best one-off I've read in long time. Can't wait to read more of your stuff, best of luck!
person JanisJ
schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I really liked the style/format of this.... Severus' snarky narration interspersed within was hilarious!
Great job :)
person SilverMyst
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That ending was such a tease :P lol Great story though, I really did enjoy the narrative here-and-there style. It was different, but quite enjoyable. Thanks for the good read! (ya tease :P lol)