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October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good as always! :D I love it... right now I just can't wait till chapter 10. cuz that's where the NEW chapters begin :D
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, how Tom seems to be falling in love but views Hermione as on object to be owned. Skirting the line between light and dark.
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glade to see you updated and that you are continuing on with the story. Looking forward to seeing more.
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Tommy don't like to be touched. Poor kiddo.
I know how that feels. I feel that way too many times :(
I know how that feels. I feel that way too many times :(
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I remember I had the same reaction at that age to people snogging. It was the most gross thing I'd ever seen xD
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it!
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter, can't wait for more. :)
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Always loved the first chapter.
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October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update the other chapters soon. :)
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October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Sorry, it's just... I only came to AFF to see if one of the Tomione fics I read were updated before starting to read a fan fiction at FF.Net... The funny thing is, I was about to read yours on FF.Net. Discovering it at AFF is so much better :D
It's a good start. I like how he was so enchanted by Diagon-Alley. I love how Tom kept being astounded by how Hermione treated him, and how he was about to steal the book, but thought of Dumbles. All in all, I can see you are trying to make him as IC as possible. (but please, don't end up with Fluffy!Tom)
But... and there it is, the annoying "but", even though I know how mature Tom was even at that age, it is still too mature for him to want to have her someday, at least at that age. I would think that maybe when the hormones really begin to rage, that he would think like that.
Right now, I could imagine, he didn't want her to spend time with anyone but him, because she is the only one who has been this nice, and he wouldn't want to lose her.
Oh, yeah, I forgot I hand cookies to people who please me (LOL), so here's a cookie!
**This part of the review posted AFTER finding out you also wrote Ivory Tower.***
Talking about the OoC'ness of Hermione. Don't think about it. I read the Ivory Tower, as you may have noticed by the three reviews I've made to that one here, and I don't see much OoC in it, which shows that you are very much able to do the IC, and isn't that enough? You have proven yourself to be an excellent writer, and I hope to see the same excellence here (But you are still bad for making my Lord die!!! xD)
Great fic, and I hope you update soon, pretty please! :D
It's a good start. I like how he was so enchanted by Diagon-Alley. I love how Tom kept being astounded by how Hermione treated him, and how he was about to steal the book, but thought of Dumbles. All in all, I can see you are trying to make him as IC as possible. (but please, don't end up with Fluffy!Tom)
But... and there it is, the annoying "but", even though I know how mature Tom was even at that age, it is still too mature for him to want to have her someday, at least at that age. I would think that maybe when the hormones really begin to rage, that he would think like that.
Right now, I could imagine, he didn't want her to spend time with anyone but him, because she is the only one who has been this nice, and he wouldn't want to lose her.
Oh, yeah, I forgot I hand cookies to people who please me (LOL), so here's a cookie!
**This part of the review posted AFTER finding out you also wrote Ivory Tower.***
Talking about the OoC'ness of Hermione. Don't think about it. I read the Ivory Tower, as you may have noticed by the three reviews I've made to that one here, and I don't see much OoC in it, which shows that you are very much able to do the IC, and isn't that enough? You have proven yourself to be an excellent writer, and I hope to see the same excellence here (But you are still bad for making my Lord die!!! xD)
Great fic, and I hope you update soon, pretty please! :D