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you're welcome. i always try to review the ones i like... unless my compy or the site crashes and then thats so not my fault. >>

at least har come out of it none the worse for wear and finally, FINALLY got the other guy to give over. no means no dude, seriously.

considering he only just started exploring his sexuality when he got with charlie, it isn't a big surprise that he'd never heard of being cut... or looking at porn really. charley can't complain with the fall out though. 'manscaping'... snicker, snort. oh, i am so pinching that word for my own use. ^^

i look forward to seeing what you come up with for hars future plans. dragon tamer is obviously a little full on for him. maybe something like a dueling instructor or a WW version of a private detective/ problem solver. Even if har doesn't choose to go back, he could do the privately.

wow, i imagine the physical attraction to the elegant male malfoys was a serious head trip. pity their attitudes ruin the image though being on the losing side will probably have put a serious knock in their snot factor.

well, owww, Charleys going to be extremely pissed. Har was doing so well and relaxing and such too. They should have picked up from their time around him that har just doesn't DO that sort of thing. I'm sure they didn't mean to pushing him into panicked escape but they need to realize no means bloody NO! I wonder what har ran in to. It sounds sort of like the magical version of an electric fence

why do I get the feeling that both Tracey and Ginny are going to be causing trouble later on...maybe even join together in an attempt to 'pay' Harry back?

This is so fucking brilliant. And I'd just like to say that THIS is precisely why I fully intend to have sex before marriage.
I really love your characters in Hermione, Ron, Harry, Molly, and Charlie. They're brilliant and real and understandable. I'm a virgin (albeit a girl and older than Harry) with no experience and I just very much connected to Harry's confusion and embarrassment. While I've obviously discovered porn and such on my own, it's very difficult to know what is and is not acceptable when it comes to sex and everything surrounding it. I really like how matter-of-fact you've been in everyone explaining things to Harry, and I liked how you demonstrated how easy it is to sexually and emotionally abuse another person, as well as how difficult it is to obtain help when that person is your own spouse.
I can't wait to read the rest, but wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed this fic so far. And Charlie is amazing. Wish I could find someone like him. All I've gotten so far are people who want to go WAY too fast.
At any rate, thanks for the fic. I can't wait to see if you finished it yet or not!
--tati1

heh, poor harry. that lot seem pretty overwhelming at the best of times and considering how shy Har is... I'm surprised charlie didn't think of that.
Still, claim well and truly staked so they should be left alone now hopefully.

Dear, dear tracey... I do hope har loses no sleep over that one.

this is brillint i love how harry while still a bit inconfident and unsure about things in gaining his confidence back your doing a brillint job on this story.

Loving what i've read of this so far, I adore your work! :D Just a little FYI; The animals their patronus' take are actually derived from Totom Animals. The Stag, for example, represents Male virility and sexuality and pride, the dog is (Obviously) loyalty. The bear however is usually a Female totom as it represents the Mother and the feirce protectiveness of a mother for her children, I would have imagined that to be Mrs. Weasley's in all honesty...but meh, I can see why you made the connection between Charlie and the bear which was kind of sweet. :) I am a little dissapointed that Harry's Patronus changed although I understand why you did it, It's mainly because I liked the connection to his dead father and the childish need for that. Anyways, I shall continue to read, looking forward to what you have planned. (Also, I LOVE your Charlie, he's absolutely perfect! I am in envy of how canon your depictions are!)

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did you make changes in chapter 19 or did somthing else happen? Anyway I still really love this chapter and I think you hit Ginny spot on at least for your story. Will she try to curse Harry for revenge? attepmt to slip him a potion? Hell tyr to turn him to a girl or some other crazy idea of making him suffer like she feels she has or somthing? Man love this so please keep it up.

This chapter was awesome:) way to go molly^^