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for WONKY CROSS

by JanisJ

person BAFan
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 24

Glad that Harry and Charlie are finally getting over their mutual insecurities. Maybe. Hopefully. :-) (Frankly, I just wanted to smack their heads together.) Draco's tale of why Lucius gave the diary to Ginny had enough of a twist to keep it from being the same as in a dozen other stories; good job.
person Frances
schedule January 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I could heap praise on you, but I think people have probably done so much of that already. I will say that I love this story, I think it's absolutely flawless, and that you should be very proud of yourself as an author. I wait for the next chapter with baited breath.

Oh, and don't let RL get you down. It could always be worse. :D
person suffering
schedule January 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please can we have another chapter I am suffering withdrawal symptoms from this fic I love it. Merry Xmas and a happy new year to you.
person slearl
schedule November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are continuing this. I would love updates, but not sure how to favorite on this site.
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6

"She sarcastically cupped her hands around her mouth like a megaphone before she yelled, 'News flash: you don
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14

Arghh! Right now I want to shake Ginny until her brains start to ooze out her ears - except she needs what few of those she has. Harry had enough self-esteem issues *before* she went to work on him. Now . . . let's hope Charlie can instil some confidence in him. Lovely sex scenes, BTW.
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 17

It was equally fun to read, LOL!
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19

So here's what I envisioned for a tiny part of the Ginny/Harry confrontation:

"No
person BAFan
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19

Forgot to say that I'm relieved that Harry's Patronus has reverted to its original form. That bear just didn't seem to fit, IMO.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good. Re-read the whole thing since I was missing a couple chapters and it was a long time ago that I read it. Easy reading (punctuation, you know who is talking to whom) and it makes sense - people...wizard or muggle...do think and work the way you present the story. And hey it is gloriously sexy & smutty!!