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for WONKY CROSS

by JanisJ

person Maethoriel Raina
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, can't wait to see part two! I'm waiting to see what happens. I'm guessig Ginny will try and wiggle her way out of a dissolution as she would want the support and the name. I can just see Hary saying 'fine, I get to have a lover and we each support ourselves money wise,' something tells me she won't like such 'fairness' being applied to Harry as well as herself. Please update soon! :)
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love it love it! and ginny is so fucking clueless, but it looks like mama's about to blow her top *evil laugh* keep up the great work, can't wait to see what happens next :D
person Kitten
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I have never reviewed a story on here but I just HAD to drop a line! This is an amazing story that is really headed into a great direction. Please add more soon. I can't wait to see the evil witch get her due. I have hated her since book 6! Can't wait to see what happens.
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! now THAT's more like it! if she's trying to sue for half then I hope to gods all four of them smack Ginny senseless, she deserves it!
person 917brat
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
now this is getting real good it is getting fasanating and i really can't wait to see what you have happen next so please, please, pretty please keep this up and updat it agian real soon.
person Maethoriel Raina
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really, really loving this story! It's great to finally see the Harry/Charlie relationship to take place. Looking forward to them getting even closer, though Harry grabbing Charlie while he was dreaming was rather hot, I'm looking forward to more :) Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!! Please updatesoon :)
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I can't wait to see that Ginny gets hers. She deserves to suffer for what she put Harry through.

xoxo,
kitkat
person Arieru
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading your story and I'm in love. Charlie and Harry are a pairing that is simply too hot. Lol. I think the way you have portrayed Ginny and Molly is amazing. I'm not a particular fan of either characters in this story which means they were well written xD. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
Arieru
person lazybean
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg i love it i want no need more soon please i might die from the wait i read this all tonight it's 6 am for havens sake and all i can say is MORE!!! lol seriously though this is just fantastic you write so descriptively the characters emotions are so clear i could feel them myself