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for WONKY CROSS

by JanisJ

schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Molly, you are going to once again prove to me why you are one of my favorite characters ever. i can't wait to see what this brilliant author has in store for you. Hope I don't have to wait for long.
person Linika
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh, I really love this story! Though it was a mean place to stop -,- I would so like to see the rest of that scen soon! I really do love this! The drama is awsome :3 Good work!
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. I can not wait for the next chapter. I am bouncing on my seat about what Molly has to say about all this.
person oOMissGOo
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was reading your epilogue and, I must say: I love it... there is a pleasant anticipation for your creation, I can't wait to read it ;)
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. Noticed a little discrepancy though. In the list of expenditures from the bank, it lists Ginny as G. L. W. Ginny would be Potter now, rather than Weasley, and also at the end of the chapter, her mother yells her middle name, which is Vivienne, which doesn't match the L from the bank document.
person Ria
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOH bitch gonna get it now! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just want to know, when does Harry strangle her? Because that's the part I want to see.
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how long was Molly there!? That woman is unbelievable. Ginny I mean. Holy crap, what a bitch. I'm surprised Ron was as restrained as he was. I kept expecting him to burst in.

So, I've thought a lot about this story while waiting for the next update, and I realized something about Molly. The poor woman just lost a son. She probably didn't really realize what Ginny was up to. Ginny probably lied to her as well, although I still think it weird that she gave Ginny the ring instead of asking Harry if he'd like to present it to her. Anyway, I decided to cut her some slack until we learn what her reaction to the divorce will be.

I bet that bitch will refuse to sign! I can see her fighting tooth and nail to get as much as she can. I really hope not though.....After all, wouldn't a messy divorce hurt her chances with the Harpies? ;) (*snort* good name. she'd fit right in)
person tinkita
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really love it! I can't wait for the Harry/Charly slash. Please update soon!
person 917brat
schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow this is brillint and now molly is finally seeing how heer daughter is...so is the rest of her family for that matter. This is truly great I love how harry is finally understanding whathe feels and is finding out what a bitch Ginny is...I wonder how the others like bill, fleur, fred and george will react when they find out what is going on. hopfully Harry can tell them, or the others will inform them, of what is going on before Ginny give them her tale with her own twist in it...got to say I truly adore this story and honeslty cant wait to see just what you are going to have happen next so please, please, pretty please, keep this up and update it again as soon as you can because this is a truly brillint story that has me compeltly hooked and on the edge of my seat really eager for more.