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for WONKY CROSS

by JanisJ

schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! har knows and admits it... now all he's got to do is keep that resolution without the booze buzz and in daylight hours. Go for it har! He's good for you!
person Blushingbrightred
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really really brillint...really
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so you won't get the Molly-esque "Where HAVE you BEEN!?" I was planning, lol. I used to manage a small box retail store, just last year and TOTALLY understand the craziness.

So, you'll understand this, then. I'm sitting here, in cracker barrel, lol eating breakfast and giggling T how close I imagine harry is to charleys er.....you know. I'm thinking to myself, he's gonna get spouged, lol. And then it happens. It was all I could do not to snort out my tea lol. I loved that whole part. It was so sweet and funny! I can't wait for next time! Lovely chapter!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about time you caught a clue Harry. That was amazing! loved it! so very VRY hot.
person dt
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh please please write another chapter, I'm checking every day and there is still 10 chapters, I can't wait to read a new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kibou32
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi.

I've been reading this since it started. It's actually pretty good. I thought this one would run over and out, more rather than less although I'm not upset with the outcome. I hope the next installment comes out and quickly.

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person daemonkieran
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like Molly's character representation here. It fits with how I normally view her type of person. Overbearing, well-intentioned proud mother bear.
person tinkita
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait for some Harry/Charlie time! Please update soon!
person LeeAnn
schedule November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and REALLY like it!!! I hope that the next chapter will have Molly and Arthur's conversation with Ginny in it. Do you send e-mails to your readers when you update? The only bad thing about this site is there is no way to mark your favorites and have an e-mail alert you to when there has been an update. If you do, my e-mail is leeann_gutter@yahoo.com. Again, wonderful story!
person fabrickitty
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are so talented! This is seriously one of the best stories I have read in ages... good enough to force me out of lurking. :p

Xoxo,
Ayla's favorite aunt.