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So you make rapid updates then leave us waiting for more? Unfair, my dear. Unfair. More please?

I'm loving this story and I can't wait to read more. I come check this every day...I hope you update the story soon!

Oooohhhh Hermione is finding shinies! LOL I am just itching to know about all these little loose ends you keep throwing out. Where to you come up with such interesting ideas? So rocking! Innocuous and fun banter, keeping in character, etc. He's grooming her to take over, he knows he wants her but is confused, that memory teasing at the edges of his conscious, the danger they are in. I don't have anything better to do than track NORAD/santa with my kids tomorrow night then sleep and awake to a blizzard of wrapping paper. So I look forward to your installments! Keep writing youa re very good!

I am wondering where you are going with all of these urges Severus is having to be caring towards her. I know they slept together and he doesn't remember it, or even if it is part of your "before" plot that he doesn't remember, but if it isn't I would highly recommend weaving in some type of implied caring/tender moment between the two. Something along the lines of developing feelings he forgot about in some manner, something she had said or confessed to him, I don't know but all of the touchy-feeling-but-I-don't-know-why implies a lot more than just a tumble he over-drank and forgot about. I wish he'd get an erection over her and have to take care of it on their trip. LOVE the adventure!! I know people want longer chappies but I also understand how tough it is to write longer ones when what you've already written fits just so. I have no clue about the canon. I am completely A/U writer myself heh heh.

You are going to leave us with.... "Preferably on their knees?????" GAahhhhhhhh!!!! LOL

I really love this story. you've implemented some interesting and unique concepts and I love the adventure piece. can't wait for more!

goed verhaal, ik kan niet wachten op de volgende hoofdstukken. ben benieuwd.
je spelling valt hartstikke mee, iedereen kan het goed lezen en daar waar het minder klopt stoort het niet.

keep up the good work!!

oooh, she is pissed!

Must. Have. Another. Update!!! Jealous Severus? HELL YAH! A smokin' hot dragon tamer Charlie? OOOOOHHH baby! Hermione about to smoke them all? *swoons* MORE MORE LOL

Oh, I love this story!

I almost hope that Hermione is playing Severus, that she actually knows her potion is perfect but is fishing for compliments. LOL. As written, it was an incredibly tender scene - and I can't wait to see Sev's reaction when he finds out who he slept with...I am hoping it was Hermione. Of course, could throw a wrench in the works if it were someone else.

Can't wait for the next chappie!