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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like what you've got so far. It would be nice to see a bit more of their days and time that's not involved with the Triwizard tournament. I think you have set up a really interesting plotline, with so much room for character growth and expansion, you should totally take full advantage of it! I'll keep my eye on this story, I can't wait to see where you go with it next! :)
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmy favorite line, "Or as Blaise said, 'equal opportunity'."
Well said, Mr. Zabini! I hate stereotypical titles, such as bi, etc.
Good story, perfect chapter length and well thought out, even if it is your sub-conscious doing it.
You have a great style and are very good with details and grammar.
Things that make a story fun and exciting.
Well said, Mr. Zabini! I hate stereotypical titles, such as bi, etc.
Good story, perfect chapter length and well thought out, even if it is your sub-conscious doing it.
You have a great style and are very good with details and grammar.
Things that make a story fun and exciting.
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so far! Great build up!
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Draco hasn't figured out yet he has a thing for Harry? Ought to make things interesting.
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! I knew it!!!!! LOL After reading the 2nd chapter I was thinking... Draco will ask Harry about the egg and Harry will be his precious.... YAY I LOVE YOU!!!! <3 <3 <3 I really missed your writings, they are sooo light and amazing to read... they just leave me wanting more!! KUDOS
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I;m good with whatever your imagination comes up with.
Snickers. Poor Draco. what a kick to the ego and he hasn't even acknowledged that feels anything bar rivalry for Har. So, will he get him or will he suffer failure. Mwhahaha. You're so evil to our poor stuck up blond.
Snickers. Poor Draco. what a kick to the ego and he hasn't even acknowledged that feels anything bar rivalry for Har. So, will he get him or will he suffer failure. Mwhahaha. You're so evil to our poor stuck up blond.
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October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh I can't wait for the next chapter!! I am loving this!!! Like always you never disappoint!! Wooooooooooooooooot
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lols with pleasure at your enthusiasm. I can hardly wait for you to get started either.
Damn, I can just see draco doing that and Harry for once is on the sidelines and thoroughly enjoying himself there.
Interesting how Scorpious, the name was tossed in there. Very nice.
Damn, I can just see draco doing that and Harry for once is on the sidelines and thoroughly enjoying himself there.
Interesting how Scorpious, the name was tossed in there. Very nice.
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October 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks very promising :) I can't wait for more updates :D
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October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. I'll keep an eye out for this one :).