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November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well I definatly do think you write Sev better as a dom. I love how in control he is as thats very much his nature, however with all those tattoos and that spell I can tell where this is going. They both loved each other long before they even knew and now they find each other. True love. I have a problem with this. More so in the other story then this one and I've had a think about it and I think my annoyance stems from your idea of love. The love that you have when you see that person and admire them for their qualities is infatuation in my mind. I don't see how you can have a strong bond, mentally and emotionally with a person whome you only know things of that you have witnessed.Not deeper internal things or experiences.Love, REAL love comes over time when you really get to know that person. When you know thier faults and their week points and you love them even more for it. You love how they made a flower out of paper for you while they were procrastinating, you love how they try and seem cool and gell their hair up and it actually makes them look like a hedgehog that got in a wall socket. You love them for eating all the lime flavoured skittles in the packet that you don't like, you love them for keeping a photo of you that you thought looked SO ugly but they thought looked so cute. You love them because they remembered your favourite food was a treacle tart fresh from the oven and then they tried to make it and it was a complete mess but then you ended up helping him clean up and then he kissed you and you ended up with flour in your hair and spread out on the counter while he made love to you.You love him because he is not perfect and that is okay. I just think the " I always loved you" thing is a bit shallow. I am sorry. Maybe you could have a flashback of Harry seeing something in Sev that made him love him. Not just the professor but a man he can love. A private moment even. Something insignificant but that means alot to Harry for some reason.Just a thought.
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November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was a million times more awesome than I had hoped it would be. Absolute and total love for this awesomeness, I can't wait for more. ^_^
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!!! I check everyday to see if you have updated!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I hope you update soon!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOU CHARLIE!!!!!!!!!! Loved it. Update soon!!!! I'm so addicted to this story, it's insane!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You suck!!! That is such an evil cliffie! I'm addicted to this story. I can't get enough of it. I absolutely adore it. You are an amazing writer. But WHY did you have to leave me with that ending! =( I'm gonna be so on edge until you update again. Thank you, by the way, for updating this story every few days. You would have a crazed reader on your hands if you took longer than you do. Just had to gush. Love the story, love you. Everything needs to get sorted out!
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*whines* more pllllllease
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Dying for the next part.
This is a realy great story!!!
This is a realy great story!!!
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh your bloody bi@ch, I can't believe you left it hanging like that oh shame on you for tormenting me like this. i demand you update date NOW!!!!!!!
*on knees" pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!
*on knees" pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhh you evil, ending the chapter like that!!! cant wait to see what will happen next
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