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Tell you why the rating is so low. For start this is Harry. No way would he carry on doing stuff to Hermione, while shouting Ron's name. Common logic would tell you that. The last thing you would want to hear, is your lover mention your supposed best friend who has deserted you, especially when your doing your best to please her and she moaning that pricks name.

I really enjoyed this story. It was wonderfully written and I enjoyed the smuttiness. Don't let those votes get you down. I think your story deserves 5 stars.